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Oh, that was just MEAN! You can't do that to me! You must finish! I love your writing so much! I've been looking for a good Ed/Winry fic for MONTHS and yours are the first I've found! PLEASE continue! I wait impatiently!!!

*Flails* More please now thanks! Seriously, having this teaser for chapter 2 is cruel and unusually punishment. I demand EdxWinry smut! XD I'm looking forward to the complete chapter 2 for sure!

Amie - Thank you. There was one point while I writing it (must have been that time of the month...) where I just cried and cried... I'll write more soon. Thanks again.

So far, your story has already made me cry, and laugh...its wonderful...please continue it!

how DARE YOU! please, oh please don't end it there! i love ed/winry stories and this is well written. at least finish the scene if not the story... please. *sniff*

I have two things to say: one, the whole making emphasis with -emphasis- thing just doesn't work. Sorry but it looks awkward and kind of silly. The writing here is too well done to be undermined by style issues like that. Why don't you use italics instead? It has a more pleasing visually adn has the same impact.
two, "It saddened her that after years of obsessing over Edward Elric's glorious metal parts, she had no idea how to deal with the rest of him..."- SHEER GENIUS!!!! I mean, whoa! What a sentence! That was so...astoundingly descriptive of both the situation, the characters and your ability. Honestly those few words are just amazing. Blew my mind. Frankly it showed just how good you are. update!

I am so loving this story!! It has plenty of angst and romance in it and that is always a great combo!! Please update soon and good job.

Thanks so much for the compliments [blush] - always great to hear. As for the format issues - man, you couldn't be more right and I'm frustrated with it myself. I have been UNABLE to upload documents - I wonder if there's a FAQ out there - and have been forced to use the cut-'n-paste into the text area method, which strips documents of all such formatting niceties... Each time I try to upload a new chapter or story, I try to get it to work, but it doesn't recognize what I've loaded ("Please load new chapter//octet stream") whatever that means... I'll keep trying - stick with me. Hope the writing is worth the annoyance... [And great thanks for the compliments on the "glorious metal parts" line. :D]

Irene

I love this fic. Keep up the good writing!

And here I thought I was gonna have to chase you down and threaten you with a fork to get you to finish it. I'm a huge yaoi fan but you are really making me love the EdxWinry pairing my dear