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Oh...my...GOD!! I can't believe it!! I just can't believe it!! You killed them!! You actually killed Roy and Ed!! *gasps* Oh dear Lord!! *clutches stomach fighting back a wave of nausea* I feel like I've been kicked in the gut!! *head reels and stomach churns* Oh man, that hurts my heart. I'm just stunned, shocked really. I so did not see that one coming! I never saw Spiral nor do I know anything about it but that didn't lessen the impact of what happened at the end of this story. Why in the name of all that is sacred and holy did Al go off with this Kanone freak?!?! WTH?!? Al may not be the brightest bulb in the box but really? seriously? just walk away with this psycho after just witnessing everything he'd done?? just leave your beloved brother and father figure lying there and never look back to mourn them?!? Al! Have you no heart?!? or common sense?!? *shakes head sadly* Oh Al, I never would have dreamed that you valued proving your existence over doing the right thing so much. Did Kanone abandon Winry, injuries and all, to fend for herself? Will she go back to him? Guess I'll never know the answers to these questions since you said somewhere in one of the middle chapters (I started reading this just a few days ago just so you know) that there were 29 chapters to this story making this the end. But, you know what? I don't think I really want answers to those questions. No, I don't really wanna know. That was one hell of an ending and anything else would spoil it. It killed me no end and, yes, I cried if you must know, but Roy and Ed died a truly beautiful death. If only Ed could have heard Roy tell him he loved him one more time. *wibbles* Fate is indeed that cruel. *sobs*
Koneko =^.^=

This is an intersting take on the elric brothers beginning! I can't wait to find out how your plot progresses!

Wow, um that was alot to take in. Should this maybe have been in crossovers? I really hate Kanone, what a jerk! I can't believe you killed Roy and Ed off!

*head still realing*

Why, my sweet, bring Spiral into this? The series didnt even have the decency to finish itself. I still dont know what the hell the Blade Children are and why they're all so morbid.

oh what happens, what happens?! and, spiral? is this turning into a crossover? ^____~ keep up the great work, this story is so interesting!

um, i just found this but i hope you update. i want to find out when they started dating. and roy has to tell ed that he means it.

I love this story, I've had it bookmarked since I started reading fanfics, was one of the first I found. Thanks for reviewing my stuff btw.

-sits back and crosses arms, snickering- I knew it. I knew that Roy would have order's about Ed. What... that I didn't know. I'm not god, I cant see the furture. But I can see yours and its not going to be pretty if you dont update.

OMG! What will happen? That mean mean boss guy! And omg poor Ed!! *Hugs the blonde alchemist* My poor sexy baby!! Roy: ¬_¬ Ed: O_O;;;;;;;; *cries* You had such an awful life but now you have Roy to hold and love you and make you forget and feed you and you have Al who is sweet and caring and gentle and would always be there and sorry this review is going no where. -_-;;;; Loved the chapter loved the fluff. And who dare hurt Ed when he was young? Who!! Roy should meet up with that bastard and make him pay or uh her..or it cause well not sure if Ed was raped by a guy so yeah.(GUessing he was cause well duh) Anyways sorry for the long and random review. Sorry. Loved the chapter and cannot wait to read more and read some smut >> << Yes smut. =3 JK JK. Update soon. Love it! =3

WTF?? Where's the chapter?