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*Cries with Ed* Whaaaaaaaaaa poor Ed getting hurt!! Gah Roy make it up to him! more food! Then smut! JK JK Or am i? >> Anywas i was Awwwww when Al was with roy and it was the whole father ,son moment. How cute!! Al is such a sweetie!! Gosh i hope he can make Ed understand so that way when roy comes home he will find Ed dressed up in sexy lingerie ready for some smut and forgiving. XD JK JK JK I am sorry i am a girl who enjoys her smut between these two. Ahem. Loved the chapter. Hmmmm curious on who called Roy out. I'm calling you out. Get it? Sorry random right there. =P Update soon cause i love this story =3

I have one thing that I've been wondering about that you never addressed. Does Roy know that Ed was raped and was anything done to help him get past it. Because it seems like it was something that was a major source of problems and then you just didn't mention it ever again. I'm assuming based on something you said, about him letting Roy touch him, that they'd worked towards him getting over it. But you never said, so I don't know if what happened was a more realistic situation of them having to work through it slowly or the more unrealistic situation of "Oh well, I was raped. Let me just go on to have sex with the first person who tries" I really wish that had been addressed because that's something I've definitely been wondering about.

yeah this chappy was good and it was funny as well i dont mean to put the squezze on u but i just love this story as i said for the 15th time lol. well come out with the next chappy because it became one of my daily things to read this story when im not doing evrything else.have fun with it lol

Yep! I was born and raised in St. Mary's ^^lol Yeah! Shark is pretty good (once you get used to it).... I didn't like it at first, but /I/ think it tastes a little like bass... Though thats just my opinion....


*clasps hands together* Poor Ed-kun! Roy-Bastard's lies have hurt him so! *cries*

Though it was surrounded by misery, my favorite part of it, and probably the most funny part of it was:

~"Just don't let him trash my house." he called to Al.

"Okay!" Al called back, waving.~

^^ I liked it! And *bursts out laughing* I suppose you couldn't use anything /but/ sore or stiff in that sentence, could you? Still got me thinking dirty thoughts! ^^ hee

I wonder who called Roy?

And I /guess/ I could understand that he was only protecting Ed and Al (grumbles for five minutes) from the truth, but still! *whines* Ed /trusted/ him!

And he's STILL keeping the whole truth from them! Not telling them about him going after Alchemists! They might be in danger!!! Oh no!!!!

Roy better make up with Ed! And be Ed-kun's SLAVE for a YEAR for lying to him! *grrrr* ^^lol

I can't wait till the next chapter! I'm so excited! *claps hands and jumps up and down* Woo hoo! Hurray!

-blinks- I didn't know I was now your master, but that's a thought I shall keep in mind. So what shall I say now? -clears throat- I really can see where this is going. I really can, so I have something to say that I always do. KEEP WRITING DAMN IT!

man this is once again nothing short then perfect i dont know what it is but i cant stop reading this story look what you did you got me hooked to your story i hope your happy with your self lol. but i love it so far so keep up the good work and do the next chappy make me proud ok lol

*Drools* Lucky ed I love takoyaki. Anyways uh huh! So the way to Ed's heart is through his stomach first. Heh That was a cute chapter loved the last part where Roy kissed and tucked Ed in well is it called tucked in even if its a couch? So cute! Now on with the smut. LOL Jk jk jk =3 Update soon.

*pulls out a dog whistle*

*blows whistle* *taps foot impatiently*

*suddenly there is a stampede and ten State Alchemists appear in front of her, pushing and shoving to get attention*

*grins* Hello Boys. Build me a house! *Immediately they get to work, trying to outdo each other*

Well, if there wasn't one before, my Dogs will /make/ one for me... After all, I'm in for the long hall, might as well be comfy while I wait.

GET ME A SODA!

*One ALchemist breaks away from the quickly-raising house to disappear behind somewhere, and comes back bringing a drink*

*grins* Awww! This is the life! The Gutters aren't so bad, once you decide to stay! ^^lol



I loved the chapter! I hope that Ed doesn't get hurt by Roy's job! But it was great finding out what he does! SO he /does/ know alchemy! ^^ *Suddenly gets down* Damn! There wentr my theory for Ed controlling the fun in bed! You ruined my dreams! ^^lol Not really!

I can't wait to read a /ssssssstttttteeeeaaaammmmmyyyy/ chapter of Roy and Ed together! *drools*

How Ed got Al out of the room, sadly, is /very/ believable! I could see it happening in the show (if this really happened)! ^^

-clears throat and taps foot.- What did I tell you before? Didn't I tell you that your not allowed to stop typing? -is slowly pulling out gun-

I don't know why you insist on asking if we enjoyed it! The answer is YES of course! ^^ I loved it!

My favorite part was ~Ed continued chewing not wanting to open his mouth for anything. Still, the genius chef deserved to be complimented for his amazing feat, "IT'S AMAZING!!!!!" Ed yelled, spewing pieces of intestine everywhere, including Roy's face. Ed frowned at the loss of flavor, but soon forgot it as he popped another one in his mouth, deciding better than to speak again for fear of losing more.~

^^ I agree with Mustang!

Octopus? Ecck!

Though, if it was shark.... thats a different story.

That or crabs, considering I live right near the water! If you don't love crabs, you ain't from Maryland! ^^lol

Its like a requirement to like, if not /all/ seafood, then at LEAST crabs! ^^

And I felt sooo sad hearing about Roy's other secretary!

And him being like secret police is really killing me! ^^

Its soooo funny and reminds me of Mr. and Mrs. Smith!

I just watched it a few days ago for the first time! it was hilarious!

My ma hated it though.... *sigh* You can't please everyone, I guess...

And Ed being compared to a wife?

I reeeeeaaaaalllllllllyyyy don't think he'd like it, but it was a funny idea! *grins*

His, errr, /unique/ beauty does help him out there.... ^^