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-Raises hand- When the hell did the two get togeather? And for how long? I'm seriously confused about this chapter. I went back to read the last chappy to see that it wasn't in there. Just Ed being the ass that he is. So I'm confuzled with this.

Crikey! Please update! Please please please!!

XD I am hooked!

That was so cute! I mean when Roy was picking on Ed! I cracked up poor Ed he didn't get to say any good come backs. Oh roy has an awesome sounding job. Oh oh how did they become a couple? I mean will you give us like a quick flashback on how they actually started feeling something towards each other. I liked this chapter, great job as always. Update soon. Can't wait. =3

Okay, well, the one problem I have with this is that you had utterly no story on how Roy and Ed got together. It may have been four years, but honestly. If Ed had been raped, it would be a long and torturous process to get him to let Roy that close. That would be a great story, getting them into a relationship, and its what I had been looking forward to. Age Ed, sure. But don't just say "boyfriend" right away. Not to mention Roy being guilty about wanting someone he'd raised, someone so much younger than he was.
Plot points aside, I didn't notice any glaring spelling or grammar errors. So technically it was good. Good luck writing.

Roys a hit man he kills people for a living

Loved Ed being a shopoholic! XD Loved when roy asked him about the toy and his response was watchamacallit. Or whatever. can't remember how to spell it. ^^;;;; Anyways oh oh i know what Roy is, An assassin!!! XD NO no a spy! Like James Bond!! Oooo Roy being a spy how hot...an assasin even hotter. Anyways loved the fluff at the end so sweet. Update soon. =3

Love it!! love it!! love it!! please keep going and update very very soon!!!!

Is he really bipolar? *cries* There goes my dreams of him being the perfect guy! *Pauses* But then again, he's gonna be with Roy anyways... *cries harder* Now I'll never find the perfect guy!

^^lol Actually, I'm thinking of looking up real estate in those gutters... How much is a three bedrooms house there? I need lotsa space for my Ed plushie, books, and torture room for evil characters... And how good is the view? ^^lol

I can't wait to see the next chapter! Ed was acting just like a girl! *giggles madly* Me, I don't really do the shopping thing (unless it has manga or anime involved, or I suddenly have the urge to shop ^^'') very much, but it was hilarious!

So Roy doesn't do alchemy in this? I guess Ed can't always be /too/ submissive in the bed with the perv! ^^ Its good he'll have the alchemy as a powering tool... ^^

And as for my guess for what Roy is... I say he's a SPY!! Or a like secret agent man or something! Or a thief! Or a.... hmmmm.... what are those people how are "companions" to clients in established businesses for dates and such? I can't remember...

*Pats Ed-kun plushie on the head* Ed-kun let out all his steam and is sleepin right now (thank the gods!) *whispers* He's such a handfull for such a sm- /CUTE, I MEANT CUTE/ plushie. ^^lol

I am starting to feel curious at when Roy finds out about what happened to Ed before he and Al went to Winry's though... Its starting to make me nuts! ^^lol ANd poor Roy-roy! Loosing his parents in an accident... It makes you just want to shove him and Ed in a closet with handcuffs and chocolate sauce... *drools*

If I was more awake and if it wasn't the middle of the night, I would know what Roy did for a living. But unforently I'm half awake and out of it. But I must say this: I love this story!!!!!!!!! -glares- You must write more. I need more to live

man i dont no what it is but i looooooooooooooove this story so much i saved what uhad so far on my computer and im so happy u just gave us the ninth chappy!!!!!!! u should like get a reward or somethin for this story so update quick because i cant wait to see what happens next!!