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YAY!! i hope that they get along well. I'm like in love with this story right now! XD


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kitsune master no hentai

^^ Hurray! Bonzai and all that good stuff! ^^ A new chapter! I missed it! And it was a great chapter too! i loved it! And that Jimmy brat should get his!! *grr* Messing with poor Al! Ed-kun should beat him blue! ^^lol And i can't wait to find out how everything goes! How Ed explained his decision was very believable! ^^ *hugs* I can't wait till the next chapter! It should be great! Don't take too long! And ignore those irritating reviewers being rude, if they are I mean... Some people have no tack... -_-; Sadly, I'm one of them! ^^lol But thats ok!

meant no disrespect. Some people just honestly don't think about the logistics of the plots they set up, and that bit was nagging at me.
I very much like this concept, and it's pretty well written. <3

Very enjoyable. :D In chapter six I rather expected to find Ed showing up and beating those boys then wailing on Roy but I was pleasantly surprised. :):) More chapters soon please!

Winry doesn't do any kind of background checks? no questions about how the prospective adopter lives, does he/she have a job, stuff like that?
just "Hi, i want a kid", "Okay."? it doesn't seem very realistic.

Yay Roy is here to save the day!! XD *hugs author* Loved it even though it was short i just loved it cause Roy came along and the way you described him my gosh i could see how sexy he looked in there well he is sexy all the time. Eh i am sorry i am just babbeling. =P Anywyas He better see Al! He can't adopt anybody else!! He better see Al say he is interested in adopting him but them Al says he has a bro and Ed comes along and fgives him some mouth i mean cusses and such. XD Okay sorry i am babbeling on again. =P Sorry sorry. Anyways update soon cause i want to know what will happen ya? =3 gratsi!

Roy /not/ be perverted? *snorts* Impossible!!! ^^lol

Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh no! Ed's not going to be seen! Roy might try to adopt Al by his self! Without Ed!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*sniffles* poor poor Ed!!!


You got it right in one that I'm protective of Ed-kun!! (grabs plushie and starts making baby voices)


*ten minutes later, she is putting the pludhie doen for a nap... the doll is starting to look at her funny*

I love the whole child thing, i like this story alot. I love how you have been writing it. I thought this chapter was nice. I love Ed defending Al, so cute..well he does do that in reality but still so cute especially when they are kids. Oooo Roy soon coming? Yay! I cannot wait! Pleas update soon. =3

Aww! How DARE that evil child even TOUCH Ed?!? *growls* He has no right!! I'll get him back if he ever even LOOKS at Ed again!! And Al! The poor dear!!! ^^lol I guess them being kids is just too much for my (unontrolled)emotions... Great chapter, by the way!! Hurray!! And how old /is/ Winry?

I just read all the chapters for the first time and its an awesome story so far. I really like how your going into detail with Ed's feelings and bringing out his character more. Keep up the great work and i'll be looking forward for an UPDATE ... ^^