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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Mai. Beastiality and ugly troll wannabe's
*AShudders*
*AShudders*
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapters add some more
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha! ha! ha! I don't know who to feel more sorry for! Bulma Chris, Palif or Mai! Mai should have been more careful in asking her wish now she's stuck with it! What will Chris and Bulma do now I wonder? If Bulma does take Chris home I wonder what her parents will think of him? Knowing Bulma's mom she'll think he's a nice young man. Maybe Bulma can rope Chris into some expreiments, update soon so I can find out!
By the way it was nice to see a bit of plot beside Chris and Bulma's lovemaking, that is what makes this so good. Keep it up!
By the way it was nice to see a bit of plot beside Chris and Bulma's lovemaking, that is what makes this so good. Keep it up!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL.... *shakes head* DBZ cross over with XXX Porn. hehehehehehehehehehe, so funny.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is HOT and I mean HOT! And this is just the first chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! Good Job!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another hot chapter! And if Chris dosen't want to suffer Bulma's wrath for much longer may I suggest Chris tries to make it up to Bulma next chapter? So long as its in reason of course! You are going good! So good you are on FIRE! I love this Chris/Bulma couple! Keep it up!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the hottist fic I ever read I want to read more chapters!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... the story isn't over yet... so we'll have to see what happens to Bulma in the following chapters. :)
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL
Now that you have this little self-insertion *snicker* out of the way, are you going to be writing something more along the lines of cannon DBZ?
This isn't the best, but it is also far from the worst fanfiction I ever have read.
Now that Bulma has a boyfriend, per say, what is she going to wish for?
Now that you have this little self-insertion *snicker* out of the way, are you going to be writing something more along the lines of cannon DBZ?
This isn't the best, but it is also far from the worst fanfiction I ever have read.
Now that Bulma has a boyfriend, per say, what is she going to wish for?