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for Cruelty in the dark room

by Ayden

schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I understadn teh issues with English so I don't hold it against you, i promise. Actually it's been surprisingly easy to over look them. I like the story concept you have. Though parts do make me twitchy at times...But I'm sure I've written worse in my time. Keep up the good work. If you ever need a beta let me know. I'm a grammar and spelling freak so I don't mind looking over others work. I do it for my friends all the time. JB
person lily. xD
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=D I really liked your stories! I was so hooked; although there were some mistaked but i understood then anyways; lol. I read all the chaptersin less then half an hour. *feels proud* XD
And I see you're searching for a new beta again. If you're interested; I'd love to be that person. n.n
I'd love to help you with anything I can. I'm totally up for the job. xD And I'm definately capable.
If you can; please email me about it. (: Hope you update soon!
person juna
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t left you!!!! *cries* i just never got any of your emails!!! I always checked and checked but nothing. Could be my email is acting up T_T I am sorry! Buut no i haven\'t left you! I still enjoy being your beta cause i love your story!!! Keep it up! And email me i need to see if the stupid thing is working, or else i will give you anotehr email. ^-^ Update soon ya? =3
person Lisa
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dark story but it is addictive.
person Ayden
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, it\'s good that Quadrian got it out of his heart :D If fanfiction and yaoi really bothers him that much, why does he read them? And if he just comes here to tell that he hates yaoi, that just shows he being childish and narrowminded. And who cares that he has a girlfriend who is bi? It\'s everybodys own thing to write yaoi or yuri or just read the fics. If he has to come and complain about this and that, then let him be :D I am waiting for his respons, because these people are so stupid XD Even if I don\'t like for instance religions, I am not yelling straight to their faces that religions should be removed from the world. That guy really should go home and grow up few years, then show up again.
person Quadrius
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... You, ALL OF YOU, are the reason why whatever powers there may be hate fangirls.

1. KEEP THE YAOI IN THE YAOI SECTION. JHC.
2. ... Why do Fangirls enjoy doing fics of their favorite male characters fucking? I mean, really. (Oh, and before you play the old \"Omg you just dont like gays\" card, my girlfriend is bi. And, I don\'t write Yuri. So there.
person sarah
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!! AWESOME JOB! PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I don\'t want roy to go bad again. i think it would mess up the story and i wanna know what happned that night. after roy got on top of ed you cut it off??!!! did ed admit to loving roy or did roy admit to loving ed and ed agreed to it or something??? and thats why roy is all happy today and back to almost normal??? PLEASE HURRRY THE SESPENCE IS KILLING ME!!! I hate waiting and the suspence! thanks soooo much
person Juna
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay the new chapter i liked it, i can\'t wait for the update and i do not think you will screw this story up ^^ It is coming out real good ya? =3
person ShishoKat
schedule March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good job! Good story!
Keep up the good work......
(yes, it\'s dark but not too dark and not too strange)
:)
person Lolichan
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I like it!!

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