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AHHHHHH!!! ed was so cute in this chapter!! Like a little boy!!! So cute!! I want to hug him! Loved how he was acting. And nuts no raping in the ferris wheel ride? XD Only kidding. Oh oh I can beta for you if you like just email me if you want my help. =3 Update soon.

Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!! T T Damn j00 and j00r no ferris wheel rape-ness! I pout at you! *pout*

Awwww! That was sooo adorable. Very OOC. But do I care? Duh-uh. I don't. It was so sweet. Let those dark feelings fade away! Please let them make love in the Farris Wheel or whatever it was called. Let Roy be gentle. ^_^

I am not English myself, but I think you don't have to worry too much about your English, I think it's quite good. The only thing I really miss in this story is lube! When two males make love you need lube, or it will certainly hurt for the one getting something inside of him. So, add some lube to this story! Apart from that, the story is good. ^_^

Ish me again! ^ ^

For someone who lives in Finland, you've got better english than most people with English as their first language.... > >;



Ah, such a lovely chapter... -^ . ^-

Love the lemon, love the lemon *nuzzles the lemon*. XD I'm a little...out of my right mind at the current moment so don't mind me. ^^;



And update sooooooon-ness!

Yeah amusement park time! Loved the whole Ed asking him to go with him. SO cute of making him ask i was expecting Roy but i liked ed making the suggestion and asking him to win him a teddy. So cute!! Anyways loved that you added the whole sense of dark roy and i hope you keep that up. It is the battle of the emotions for Roy! Oh oh let them have cotton candy! XD i am a dork. Oh oh and ride the ferris wheel! That would be romantic oh but then make Roy go back to his evil ness and try to rape Ed in the ferris wheel cart/thingy....O_o. Okay no wait what am i saying. =P Sorry your story heh. Oh and your english is actually good. you do miss 'the' but i don't care cause i like your story alot. Keep it up. can't wait for the update =3

Omg! Roy so cruel...well maybe..i dunno i just love it! I was actually sad reading what Ed said to roy about him not wanting to hurt just be loved. So sad. *Hugs Ed and cries a river* Ed and Roy: O_O
I loved it, oh oh they should go to an amusment park! They are so fun! Wait are there amusment parks in their time? *Ponders* Update soon =3

I'm not exactly sure if this is a good idea, but maybe you should make it so that Roy is struggling to be the loving/gentle guy that Ed wants him to be and the cruel guy that he used to be. So like he tries being nice but sometimes he goes to far and ends up hurting Ed again... ugh i really don't know, lol. Good luck!

omigod i love.............................it
joo haf to finish it

I think it's cute. Roy realizing that he's hurting Ed and not making him feel good. And then asking him out. I sincerely hope that you continue this story. ^_^