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for Cruelty in the dark room

by Ayden

person Ri
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Yes you are making it a story! yay!! I love it!! love the whoel asking ed out on a date but how will he act? That is the question? Anyways great job love it love the feel of dark in it...oooo darkness XD Please update soon ^^
person K
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, the last chapter is soo cute. i loved it. i really would like it if you continued!
person K
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is GREAT! UPDATE!!
person Pickles
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. The end was a little confusing... But I liked it.
person Ri
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I say it was good and hot and nice and steamy and i was sad at the ending part. That was sad. T_T Good job i think ^^
person Mustang
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh hoo hoo! I like this... ^ ^ *purrs* Edo-rapage is always great. *nod nod* Great character torture.





Have you read Blue Flame, by any chance? It's a Roy/Ed doujin. It's kinda like this.
person KousukeAsazuki
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, well, you know what they say: You always hurt the ones you love. Is that what you were aiming for? If not, then I am a bit confused by the ending. Though, I think Ed might be addicted to the pain, or else why would he keep coming back? Either way, good job!

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