rate_review Reviews

I really like this story. I'm usually not a big fan of yaoi, but this one is really good! Keep up the awesome work.

I'm only on chapter four thusfar, the plotline is good, action and characterization are a little thin but completely acceptable. the only issue I have is with your third person, present-tense. I've never liked present tense, even in first-person voice, but it is _only_ appropriate in first person. you need to edit this into past tense since you are using third person voice.