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April 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hello, thank you for writing "F" as in Falcon. I adore it and keep reading it. All of my favorite characters and my favorite pairings. I'm quite picky when it comes to the written word,this is a good fan fic. Again Thank You.
Sincerely,
Story.
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this fanfic, i hope there is maybe more i wuld like to see more in the future
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
About time! <3
Yay Rei! That's pretty clever, what he did.
Yay Rei! That's pretty clever, what he did.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
About time! <3
Yay Rei! That's pretty clever, what he did.
Yay Rei! That's pretty clever, what he did.
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still love it! I think i have read this fic like a million times so far! i hope you update soon! Keep up the good work!
JA!
JA!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww such a cute chapter!!!! Cant wait for the next one!!! Update soon!!! ~Hoshicat
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww d.boys visste inte att tomten inte finns på riktigt... så sorgligt... *hides* fortsätt uppdatera, älskar denna historien!!!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Finally done with reading and finally I get the chance to leave a review for ya^^
GodS, I don't know where to start <.< Probably with the great story plot *__* I love the idea of this letter-writing-thing *hugs* I read a lotta fics and I hadn't seen one with the same idea ^^ That's mainly what kept my interest in the first chapter to continue on reading - that great letter Bryan wrote! But now I'm totaty captivated by the storyline *~* Your fic rocks!
Hm, another great point - the boys' relationship >//< I so love the idea that the Demolition Boys are like a family. I loved the part where Kai said Spencer was some kind of a 'mother' on a team *squeaks* Everytime they talk to each other or comfort each other makes me squeak with delight! I so love it how they are taking care of one another, just great. Most of the Fictions I read use the Demoliton Boys as the 'bad guys' and I was getting so fed up with that >_< So glad I discovered your fic then *squeaks again*
Oh, and Ray! A-d-o-r-a-b-l-e!!! I love his charakter and you describe him and his personality so perfectly in your fic, it amazes me *~* So happy he finally will get a chance to see HIS Falcon XD I love when he thinks that <.< You've let the realationship between him and Kai develop smoothly and not too quickly, just have to praise you for that *gives you a rose* Nothing is more annoying if they go all friendly on each other without any recognizable reason *drop*
Which leads me to another point - KAI *_* You encaptured his personality really great in your fic! The scene I love most is the one when he gets to talk to Tala after he's released from the hospital, just before the lemon (which was totaly adorable, too *hugs ya again*) The words of reassurence and the plea he said to Tala! Gosh *melts into mush* I'm really into this fluffy romantic stuff and I must say that was the moment I went from liking your fic to totally love it! <_< I think you just earned yourself another fan *laughs* (or a nuisance XD)
I also love the fact Tala admits that he's possesed with his phoenix *_* Always liked him that way *lol* Sweet little Kai and his agressive protector, Tala *__* *squeals*
Yeah, another thing. Mariah <_< You solved that pink problem really well! *gives another rose* I don't particullary hate her but she's such a clingy pink thingy sometimes >_< Don't like her all over Ray. You did great shoving her off XD
And, yay! Ray's gonna spent Christmas with the Demolition Boys *_* Hope you uptade soon, can't wait to read how his first meeting with Bryan will be *hops around exited*
I can just agree with Kai, I hope Voltaire and Boris will both burn in hell for what they've done *kicks boris and voltaire* >_< I hate those guys!
Hm, one thing I don't really like is when someone's calling Tala "Tal" ^^" Don't know why, to me it just doesn't sound good. But, oh well, just my opinion. The other ones like Bry or Spence are just fine but somehow I just cannot stand this 'Tal' o_O" I know your fic's being betaed, too, but there are still somethimes major mistakes there which disturbe the reading a bit, but that's fine^^
Your amazing writing style makes more than up for that. You can discribe feelings and situations really great, the events are developing smoothly with enough suspense to always keep the reader interested and exited about the next chapter. I really hope you'll uptade soon, I'm checking on your story every day <_< Maybe you should be worried about that one... *lol* Oh well, I'm quite a nice one, though, just tend to get too exited too easily *drop* XD
Thanks for writing this fiction! *hugs the air outta you* I love reading it and have enjoyed every chapter, so just make sure you update soon ^__^
Oh, and please forgive any grammar/spelling mistakes in this review ^^" I'm slightly lacking practice with English language over here in germany <_< So I hope I got my points across and you didn't have to much trouble understanding what the heck I was talking about *lol*
I can just repeat myself again, I love your fic and thank you again for writing it, so keep up the amazing work, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!
*hugs* *waves*
A fan of yours, Kate ^___^
GodS, I don't know where to start <.< Probably with the great story plot *__* I love the idea of this letter-writing-thing *hugs* I read a lotta fics and I hadn't seen one with the same idea ^^ That's mainly what kept my interest in the first chapter to continue on reading - that great letter Bryan wrote! But now I'm totaty captivated by the storyline *~* Your fic rocks!
Hm, another great point - the boys' relationship >//< I so love the idea that the Demolition Boys are like a family. I loved the part where Kai said Spencer was some kind of a 'mother' on a team *squeaks* Everytime they talk to each other or comfort each other makes me squeak with delight! I so love it how they are taking care of one another, just great. Most of the Fictions I read use the Demoliton Boys as the 'bad guys' and I was getting so fed up with that >_< So glad I discovered your fic then *squeaks again*
Oh, and Ray! A-d-o-r-a-b-l-e!!! I love his charakter and you describe him and his personality so perfectly in your fic, it amazes me *~* So happy he finally will get a chance to see HIS Falcon XD I love when he thinks that <.< You've let the realationship between him and Kai develop smoothly and not too quickly, just have to praise you for that *gives you a rose* Nothing is more annoying if they go all friendly on each other without any recognizable reason *drop*
Which leads me to another point - KAI *_* You encaptured his personality really great in your fic! The scene I love most is the one when he gets to talk to Tala after he's released from the hospital, just before the lemon (which was totaly adorable, too *hugs ya again*) The words of reassurence and the plea he said to Tala! Gosh *melts into mush* I'm really into this fluffy romantic stuff and I must say that was the moment I went from liking your fic to totally love it! <_< I think you just earned yourself another fan *laughs* (or a nuisance XD)
I also love the fact Tala admits that he's possesed with his phoenix *_* Always liked him that way *lol* Sweet little Kai and his agressive protector, Tala *__* *squeals*
Yeah, another thing. Mariah <_< You solved that pink problem really well! *gives another rose* I don't particullary hate her but she's such a clingy pink thingy sometimes >_< Don't like her all over Ray. You did great shoving her off XD
And, yay! Ray's gonna spent Christmas with the Demolition Boys *_* Hope you uptade soon, can't wait to read how his first meeting with Bryan will be *hops around exited*
I can just agree with Kai, I hope Voltaire and Boris will both burn in hell for what they've done *kicks boris and voltaire* >_< I hate those guys!
Hm, one thing I don't really like is when someone's calling Tala "Tal" ^^" Don't know why, to me it just doesn't sound good. But, oh well, just my opinion. The other ones like Bry or Spence are just fine but somehow I just cannot stand this 'Tal' o_O" I know your fic's being betaed, too, but there are still somethimes major mistakes there which disturbe the reading a bit, but that's fine^^
Your amazing writing style makes more than up for that. You can discribe feelings and situations really great, the events are developing smoothly with enough suspense to always keep the reader interested and exited about the next chapter. I really hope you'll uptade soon, I'm checking on your story every day <_< Maybe you should be worried about that one... *lol* Oh well, I'm quite a nice one, though, just tend to get too exited too easily *drop* XD
Thanks for writing this fiction! *hugs the air outta you* I love reading it and have enjoyed every chapter, so just make sure you update soon ^__^
Oh, and please forgive any grammar/spelling mistakes in this review ^^" I'm slightly lacking practice with English language over here in germany <_< So I hope I got my points across and you didn't have to much trouble understanding what the heck I was talking about *lol*
I can just repeat myself again, I love your fic and thank you again for writing it, so keep up the amazing work, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!
*hugs* *waves*
A fan of yours, Kate ^___^
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really the first I've read of one your stories and it was really good. I Love how you wrote this story. It was simple enough how you wrote it, but you put words into it that made it powerful enough to get the real meanings behind it. So, if you,( and I hope to god I'm not being rude), would PLEASE update soon. I would really like to read how Rei,( Sorry if that's wrong but people either use Ray or Rei), and Bryan meet in person for the first time. THANKS!
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It's rather cute; also I loev the paring of Bryan and Ray. I can't wait until they finally meet. Write more soon.