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Good beginning and I'm encourage you to continue this story. It's really good!

hey i like the story it's really nice good work. and thank you for reviewing my story too.

Man I love the story. Especially the pairing of Ray and Bryan. But this isn't gonna have a Tyson/Max is it? i hate that pairing. If you put them with anyone, do you think it could be Tyson with Lee and Max with Michael or something? Don't blame you if you ignore me if it's stupid, most of the others do, but it'd be really great of you could. Too bad Ray couldn't tell Tyson as well. He's the one who beat Tala after all and he's forgiving, else he wouldn't have forgiven Kai. Anyways, keep it up. Wanna see more.

Hey,

Yea another story from you. I bet it promises to be just as great as that last. Bryan and Rei is my favorite pairing because I'm all worn out on the other ones...Anyway I can't wait for your next update. Catcha' later.

-kami

aw that was so good, bless Bryan *hugs him* I hope Ray can help them....in some way anyway

update soon plz
Liah xx

I remember that terrible scene quiet well... *shudder* >.< Poor little Rei ;___;
The letter written with quill is a great idea^^ Quill writing looks just so wonderful! *.*
Please continue writing quickly! I soooo want to know what is going on and what will happen to Bry and Rei!! *really loves that pairing*

CU R-chan ^.^

XD CX update! this is such a cool story! update! CX

Wow, great story!! And i LOVE Bryan/Ray *__* The letter was very emotional.. poor Bryan ;__; I hope Ray get a chance to give Bryan his letter.. and that they become more than friends ^^ Please update soon =)
(By the way, i´m german.. so sorry for mistakes here ^^;)

OH MY! The perfect story 0.0 This is the first season, right? OMG!!! Bryan/ray, Tala/Kai (L).(L) LOVE THEM!! Please update soon, please, please.. can't wait to read more.. i wanna read moooore..pwease ;__;