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Okay that was freaking hot and all, but what happened to Goten and Trunks getting it on? It was such a tease! But the end was alright, I guess, you shouldn't have had people's hopes up about a yaoiyuri like that. Hot fic nonetheless.

Oh my god that was a great story at frist i all most didn't read it because it didn't seem like there was going to be really good sex, but it was really good at the end can;t wait intell you write another story
YOUR NEWEST FIN SAM
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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

i liked it a lot! is this a onshot or will you be adding more chapters? if yes i will be looking forward to your next chapter if not this was a great onshot :-)

Those horny Saiyans. I loved it

There is always a plot... A plot for great sex

I like the idea of the four of them acting this way, with each other
keep it up umm I mean keep the boys up umm well keep writing!