rate_review Reviews

Was that some sort of rape? Or....is there something im missing?

Definitely not bad. I like your style, but I thought it was a litte rushed in areas. Of course, sometimes that is the nature of a one shot. I could feel you building up the anticipation, but almost long enough. I do see the potential there though.

Please continue writing DBZ yaoi stories. I'd like to see how you develope them!

Macha