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for A Price to Pay

by Twylight

person Anna
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAAAT???? Don't tell me you're going to end it like that! You could, I don't know, change the movie end and say that Ed and Al stayed on their world and not in the other one, ARGH! You can't do this to me... *cries*
person michelle
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this!!!!!! please make a sequel!!!!!
person fma fan
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. Are you going to do a sequel.
person Ri
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was such a lovely chapter, thank you for sharing it with us, I loved this story and it ended lovely.
person noah
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love you! i mean... this was good. hot, but also well written. it's terrible but i'm picky about my smut and this is very good. ok, i'm off read the other chapters.
person noah
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is the best thing i have ever read. i totally addicted to this pair now. oh, man. i absolutly love it. you're a brilliant writer. you can write great smut but also... you can work it into the story so it seems natural instead of just... sex or something. wow. wonderful.
person CallistaSky
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story...I'm adding it to my favs! And the added Maes/Roy chapter made me grin like mad. Please continue this!! I absolutely love your writing.
person demon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD THAT CANT BE IT CAN IT? I just read all the 10 chapters in a hour im SOO LOVING YOUT WRITTING STYLE! i love how you stayed on the story line. it was like the exact story with some behind the scenes. well anyways i dont know if your done with it or not (i hope not) but i have a pic that would go PERFECT with this story i didnt draw it or anything a friend gave the pic to me and this fic reminded me of it I LOVE FULL METAL ALCHEMIST AND YOU CAPTURED IT PERFECT please email me if you write any more or even just to chat (i love friends)
person Ri
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmm hughes/roy that was good right there. Great chapter ^^ Update soon.
person Kai
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... How the hell do you do five rounds in two fucking hours? Is that even possable?! Anyways I'm dieing to see how this is going to end up so I give you one piece of advice: STOP AND I SWEAR TO WHATEVER GOD EXIST I WILL HUNT YOUR HAPPY LITTLE ASS DOWN, HOLD A GUN TO YOUR HEAD AND MAKE YOU WRITE MORE!!!!!! That's all I have to say ^-^ Keep up the good work.

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