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how cute! the ending was funny i laughed so hard i chocked on my french fries. more chapters or i wont stop saying.............Please please please i can keep this up for a long time...please please please please please ok i'm bored lol

very good

that was a awsome chapter!!!!! Roy finally said "GO roy!!!" update soon.......I wounder what Ed will say.......update soon i want to see your killing me (falls over dead)

Hooooo Roy just confessed!! OMG! That was a shocker!! Update soon!! I want to see how Ed is now gonna be after that confession! =3

That was so hott. More?

ZOMG!!!!!!!! XD I can hardly TELL you how much this story rocks my world! I don't care if it's just a fanfiction, it's my favorite story in the entire world!!!!!!!! Every part, detail, chapter, sentence, paragraph, has me glued to the paper! And whats more, I actually LOVE the plot just as much as the lemon!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I love your writing, and I LOVE Ed and Roy!!!!!! ^^- I find myself giggling, laughing, and saying things like "Aaaaaaawwwwwwww~~!!!!!!!!! XD" I just think the whole is so damn CUTE!!!!!!!!!! The way they're in the hallway, or when they waved at each other, said the missed each other, or when ed fell asleep on his chest, when the 'made love' @@, etc. THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD FOR MY OWN WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEEEEEEEE PLEEEEAAAASSSSSEEE PLEEEEAAASSSSSEEEE ADD MORE!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!

ROY!!!! Just say i love you already!! heh loved it loved that they got caught but by everyone!! I laughed so hard. And omg! roy made love to Ed and not just a delicious case of fucking XD! That was hot!! Can't wait to read more. Great great as always =3

This is so cute!

You're so evil! Just leaving it right there! That's... EVIL!!!

OMG!!! OMG!!! Al has just witnessed something hot!! XD I mean omg what will happen now? That was hot and of them being caught by Al!! OMG!! I can't stop my OMGs XD Awesome chapter please keep it up =3