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OH HELL NO! I WILL NOT ALLOW YOU TO STOP RIGHT THERE!!!!!! I love this story I really do that why I must say this: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! I just burst out laughing when Al walked in going 'this was gonna happen sooner or later.' Hey at least it was the younger brother and not that Bastard Archer. On and one more thing: WHY THE HELL DIDN'T YOU LET ROY TOAST HIS ASS!!! I KNOW HE LIVES TILL THE FINAL EPOSODE, BUT HE STILL NEEDS TO DIE!!!! Sorry. Im competely anti Archer. Oh well. Continue please and your'll be my new best friend ^-^

Yes Roy you better fall had for Ed! BWA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA! Great chapter. =3

Dreams no wait halucinations rock. XD Awsome chapter and omg! Roy is gaining felings for Ed! I knew it! I have thepower!! XD Okay sorry random right there Update soon. =3

cool, write some more! (gets on hands and knees) PLZZZ.......this is one of my favorite stories. :)

Oh my god! This is getting so cute!

Hot and spicy! XD I mean loved it, can't wait for the next chapter. Love how Hughes is picking on Roy about what is going on between them. Great chapter as the first two. Keep them coming. ^^

For a while there I thought that it was Envy using Ed's form, but no it was a dream. Yay! I really like this fic. It's starting to get sweet. The sweet part of their relationship is probably why this is my OTP.

OMG...I love this!!! It's rough and hot, but not dark. Absolutely awsome. The sex is just burning hot, and I really like the way Roy is so rough. And still the story is cute. Very nicely written ^_^ Please write more! You are great!

This is real good, but the whole using Japanese words in your story thing is a little annoying. Not ALL people know what those words mean, and they shouldn't have to have a Japanese to English dictionary to enjoy your story should they? Even if you DID put the translations of what the words mean at the bottom or the top of the story, Fullmetal Alchemist is set in a more European if not western society. Not once during the anime or manga does it suggest that Japan even exists in their world. They wouldn't be speaking Japanese to begin with.

Any way, keep it up, this is a really neat idea.

that was a great chapter!!!!!!!!!!write more! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz