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*Wipes drool* OMG! That was utterly hot!! Ed jerking off in the shower! Thinking about Roy!! And then here comes anoterh hot scene of Ed RIDING Roy!! OMG!! That was hot hot hot!!! I am drooling still!! Wonderful job. Update soon!! I hope one of them starts gaining feelings and making this whole matter complicating. That would be neat. Well your story and i say it is already good so keep it up. =3

please continue moremore!

Hey I liked it!! I'm happy, though, that it'll have a plot. I'm all for PWP but it gets old after a while. Hooray for Roy/Ed. Write more because you're helping inugrlrayn add to my insomnia! *snerk*

this was fun! and it was so hot! please write a longer one with more chapters next time!

OMG!!! I loved it!! I do hope you add more chapters! That was awesome! Loved the last part! Awesome!! Keep it up cause i think this is a fabulous story!!!

Brilliant!

I so need moooore!

This reads like a doujinshi - I like that.... You have a great ear (eye?) for dialogue. Both Ed and Roy sound very much in character. Can't wait to see where you go with this.