rate_review Reviews

The idea of Msutang as that fundamentally inexperienced is very alien and foreign to my slightly (very) perverted mind, but I loved the story. It made me smile, especially how Roy's brain couldn't shut up during the whole thing XD. And the end made me giggle! That could be a new project? :P . Do you TELL your parents that you read and write yaoi? That a brave man. I know for a fact that my parents are very open-minded, but I will NEVER tell them of my reading habits. Ever. It would not do well for an opening greeting when visiting XD.

...That...THAT IS SO MEAN!! Finally legal so I don't have to delete this off my computer, and all I get are teasers? T.T So unfair.

That...That was delicious. I want to see that foursome. That would be possibly even more delicious. I love Gracia and Riza in this story- they aren't protrayed as betrayers and lover-stealers, and they are portryed, if you see where I'm going with that line of thought.

Oh, that was lovely!! I enjoyed that very much... ;b I love your writing style, especially your use of imagery. And the story itself... Well, that was quite a lot of fun. And sweet too. ;b Thanks for sharing! =]

Wow... That was so friggin awesome! The first three chapters where... different, to be sure, and awesome and very hot and the last chapter was so cool... Man I would like to know about their classroom activities... XD
Oh and about homophobic parents... I know. My dad's like that, too... If he where ever to find out I spend at least half of my sparetime reading and writing yaoi he'd die on the spot... I'm lucky to live with my mom though, who isn't that bad... Good luck with them. Don't let it get you down and just keep on reading and writing, you're awesome at it :)

CRACK! CRACK I SAY!
ROFL... you know.. i was all happy for roy.. and gracia didnt kill meas.. and then BOOM! a 0_o wtf moment. that was great. brilliant even. now wheres the graduation.. lol
cant hide a glock in her bathrobe... what kinda of self respecting marksman couldn't do that? lol.
the story was wonderful. the ending made my day! hope you continue and look forward to more

hey man, you already know how much this story rocks my heart! but you're shameless plugging was making me feel guilty, so i decided to leave ya a review. hehe. talk to you later. ;)

that was absolutly wonderful. You should write a sequel. maybe. if you want to that is. no since in writing something you don't enjoy. XP

this is my first HughesxRoy story that i read and i like it. Roy a virgin who would've thought that. LOL ^_^

when you were talking about Maes attributes and how he heped Roy in all his problmes, i wanted to cry SO much cause noow he's dead.

And if santa is watching me, I'm charging him for being a pervert.