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More, please. 'K? I've been patient - I swear... So unlike me, too. And now... Now I just want more.

Get cracking, eh? You *promised*...

Oh, and - this was great! A great twist, turning what we thought we knew on its ear. And I love the relationship between them, am dying to see that played out in the next chapter. Please continue soon!

interesting concept to say the least. Fun and humorous, and your tranquility vs. silence metaphors made me giggle with English Major-y glee! I only wish you'd gotten on to the "teaching" part, I'm sure it would be deliciously awkward and funny!

Actually, this is pretty good! I like the way you've developed the characters and their long, complex friendship. That Roy is a virgin is a wonderful twist to the old "lady/man killer" Roy usually seen in fics. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in your next chapter. 8-)

This is amazing. Both were perfectly in character and I can't wait to see the next chapter. ;) Fantastic work.

Roy Mustang, the Flam(ing HAWT!) Alchemist, a virgin? Once that leap of credibility's been crossed, I think you have the makings of one incredible fic here. Don't lose the momentum; I can't wait for the next chapter!

Mmm... I don't usually read Maes/Roy (I'm a Roy/Ed fan) but, I can honestly say that this was well done and very believeable because: 1: It's sort of cannon. In the series you see Roy talk about women, and miniskirts, but you don't really see him attached to anyone but Riza. (at least I haven't); 2: The reason I don't read Maes/Roy fics is because Hughes is so completely besotted with Gracia. However, I can really see Maes trying to help Roy in such a situation (because I really think he loves his friend as much as his wife and child). So... Good job, and I'm patiently (sort of) waiting for the next chapter.