rate_review Reviews

*whines* It can't be the end! *sighs* This story was excellent, and I am glad I read it all the way through. Nice job!

Look who I found... What's a lovely lady like you slumming in a place like this? Dearest Tempest, your works are without equal! You bring life and sex to the characters of our dreams and mix them with exotic scenery and vibrant emotions. I'm sure Barb will strangle you with happiness as soon as this story takes a more sexual turn (she about turned me into a human cookie jar when she read In Heaven). Be sure to not let her hang too tightly upon your neck... And Bardock, you fool, be sure to leash that thing! Best wishes to the family!

-Keely

Well done, once again.

Nicely written. Got a good feel for the fighting styles, and reactions were perfect.

I like your OC.

This first fight was awesome and well written. I love how you give detail to their surroundings in this chapter. I didn't know she could change, and at first I was confused, glad I found out by the end of the chapter.

Well done! Update soon.

Hmmmm.... I don't care much for original characters, but I have found some to my liking in the past. So far, the character developement is good... excellent even.

I'll wait for the third chapter.

sounds oh so deliciously promising

I love it! Please update soon.

*hums happily* YAY, another terrific Tempest fic. Excellent descriptions of Bardock's surroundings. I felt like I was there, but thankfully, not the prey he was after. (Yikes!)