rate_review Reviews

I love this story. It's so cute and virginal. And so Edward. He's such a science freak, that he would be like that. And, btw, Heat by Eiri Yuki? I think we have a Gravitation fan on our hands lol.

So I stumbled across your story at random, and just read it all the way through.

First, the story is GREAT! Hilarious, unpredictable, and endearing, in typical (well, maybe not *so* typical) FMA fashion. If I had any drawing skills at all, there's quite a few scenes in there I would LOVE to see drawn.
Second, I love that you did such a great job keeping everyone in character, while telling a different story. I've read so many fanfics where the story was fun, but the characters deviated so much it almost ruined the experience.
Third, I CANNOT WAIT to read more!!

This is a fantastic story. I'm enjoying every word. Please, continue as soon as possible.

You did it! Yay! So happy to see this finished!

… I would just like to point out that I find it vastly amusing that Ed is going to be reading a heterosexual sex manual written by a man in a committed homosexual relationship. Kudos on the Gravitation plug.

Aww, that was sweet. He gets it, just... not the sex part yet. Lol. :) (:

I have been reading this for a while...I can't stress to you how wonderfully it's written. I laugh in every chapter. You make that couple fit so nicely snug together. ( not that that don't^_^) But I can't explain it...so all I can say it very nice job! I can't wait for more!!

XD!! That was a most amusing chapter, so I enjoyed it immensely! ^^

..... There's going to be a note inside the picnic basket from Winry that reads 'You bastard! You chose food over us?!', isn't there? XD

I am very entertained by the overall concept - Ed failing at sex, Roy messing with his head (or god help us all, being sincere but uneducated himself perhaps?) And some of these scenes are genuinely smoking hot *_* I like how Ed is so lost in this, and how plucky and determined Winry is to make it all work.

The one concrit I have is that the first part of Learning Curves seems rather disjointed - I had trouble following the continuity. It started off with them already done - and then goes into a flashback of the act itself in reverse? But then it proceeds again...it was a bit hard to follow.