rate_review Reviews

Yeowch! I think I\'ve just been burned. That one-shot was HOT. Smoking hot! And it wasn\'t even a lemon! Yeowza! *fans self* Veeeerrrrrry impressive! If a relatively \'tame\' fic like this can heat me up like this, I\'m almost afraid to read a full-out lemon by you--I just might not recover!

Anyway, as you can tell, I absolutely loved this! It was clever and witty (I just about DIED over the \'egomaniacal grease monkey\' comment... And then you really almost finished me off with Ed\'s inner tirade on how Winry couldn\'t POSSIBLY have NOT noticed his outburt: the line, \'...as though she hadn\'t heard him screaming obscenities to her grandmother...\' truly almost slayed me. I choked on that one.) Not to mention, everyone was so screamingly in character. I just love how well you worked WITH the characters in order to get them together. You wove a clever trap...and let them fall riiiiight into it. Brilliant! I\'m going to be re-reading this one for ages...!

Yes you captured Ed's mentality perfectly do more make this in to a sereis

I hate to say it...but that was so darn cute and funny ^^

I really liked it. I think an addition is definately in order. Be it another chapter or a sequal of sorts.

Wow, thats one of the cutest fanfictions I've ever read. and the characters are right on the mark. Fantastic job.

aw, that was so cute! Not really aff.net material but i loved it! I love fluff. nicely done.

I so totally loved this! Beautiful work! Thanks! :-D

"What does L-O-V-E- spell?"

I adore that. Great fic. Keep up the good work!

Yeah, I'm pretty sure you're my new favorite author. This was wonderful! Another perfect EdxWinry story that deserves five stars plus! I'm pretty sure I loved how Ed's rage was 'talking' to him and how you gave that emotion a human quailty. Lines like 'Ed's rage was raising its hand' made it really unique. That was truely a nice touch and I loved it. The ending line from Al was absolutely priceless as was the exchange of dialouge between Ed and Winry. It was all so perfectly in character and the idea of Winry 'branding' Ed gives me giggle fits. Awesome job, as usually. I look forward to more!!

Nice! I like your style, and Ed's internal dialogue. Very funny, very sweet.