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for Humiliation

by meteor

person Blysse
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that the second chapter of this was undoubtedly the single hottest thing I have ever read. I must've re-read the part near the end where Ed just kept coming and coming about 5 or 6 times! That was just... *Twitch*

Well done, and I'd love to see an update on this story in the near future!

--Blysse
person pj
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Very, very nice ;) ^^
person Finn
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'nother chapter plz? i want more of that XD
person Frozen_taho
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I'm going to need a minute to process what I just read....

...Ok. I've been reading fanfics for years and have never shrunk away from smut (except when threesomes are involved. thats just too messy), but this one had more than the normal share of WTF moments. What were you smoking and where can I get some?
person Frozen_taho
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Roy was such a freak. Then again, Ed isnt much better off. All in all, a twisted affair.
person wild seven
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting... I liked it, actually, though I was surprised at first. Not what I expected... :) (:
person Artemis
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drools* omg that was sooo hot go Ed who know you were such a whore

Ed: I thought you love me Artemis O_o

Artemis: I do...but your a little Roy-whore

Ed: does that even...exist

Artemis: yes it does >< great story update soon...so Ed will shut the hell up

Ed: I thought you loved me

Artemis: I DO your just a Roy-whore face fact Edo
person Ri
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O;;;;;; OMG!!! How hot was this chapter? I mean dang! It was smutty!!! OMG! SMUTTY! Loved it >>
Update soon! So dirty. Glad you updated ^_^, so keep the smut coming.!!! Please.
person Kelly
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR!! I'm so happy, I'm so happy! XD I love this kind of stuff. Domination in fics, is just my thing, heh. Please write more? This was excellent. Roy being so harsh was so hot. That whole window scene was amazing, I'm at a lost for words. No to sound redundant but... I LOVE this stuff! ^^
person Ri
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!! you must write more like this one! BRILLIANT!!!

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