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for Alone

by ElfNight

schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've never watched Gundam Wing so I can't say if your story is AUish or the characters OOC, but what I can say is that I'm hooked right from the start.
Curiosity got me reading your other Gundam fic WarCraft, and after I fell in love with it, I decided to check this one out too. I'm glad I was bored and had time because this is amazing right from the start.
You explained things so that the reader could understand them, all the reasons that got Wufei to the point where he currently is. All the beautiful deppression this story holds and the fragile hope at the ending of things and loneliness finally ending...
Oh, what can I say what I haven't already said? Words fail me.
I just... Am amazed and in love :)
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad the gang didn't forget or abandon Wufei (I'm at chapter 3) but at the same time I'm a little disappointed - I hoped Wufei would have to make it on his own. I'm still happy the gang will make everything okay again :)
I like the changes time has carved on Wufei; the way his body has both gotten weaker and stronger, and how his mind is getting out of deppression :D

I love this story. I just can't stop reading :D
And I'm not very coherent in my comments because of it xD
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that one I didn't see coming...o.0 A threesome. ...It's gonna take a while getting used to.
I wished Wufei would have just found someone (even an OC) and lived happily ever after with him, without seeing the rest of the gang ever again.

But I won't judge this story before I try it - and really try, with threesome's and all ;D
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the plot twists are fast (but not too fast ;D) and unpredictable. I'm enjoying and having fun while reading this story ^-^
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 was simply delightful :D
It had me snickering, smirking, giggling and set my eyes twinkling like Dumbledore's xD
Commander Une's my favourite character from here on ^-^
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Commander Une's attack (chapter 17) on whats-his-bastard-face was vastly amusing once again :D I less than three Une ^-^

The dragon on Wufei seems pretty. So was the part where Heero and Duo touched the dragon - very sensual :)

I can't see the suspence ending in the near future and I'm glad for that. It seems I can't stop reading until the story is through :D
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*clears throat*
The smut on chapter 18 was...brain-melting. I'm currently a puddle of goo on my room's floor.

For someone who claims to not have written threesome's before, you write them frighteningly well :D
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snatches chapter 25 and cuddles up with it all the while purring*
Do I have to say it?
I LOVED it. And I'm not sorry for the loss of sleep I'm going to suffer from tomorrow ^-^

I loved how you portrayed the characters personalities and the thing they like with out forgetting them the whole time (Heero's chain reaction was pure love ;D). I also loved the short stories in the beginning that explained what had happened and changed in a year. At first I thought they were unnessessary and too long - too much of them in the short while, but in the end I was very happy that you wrote them since they were funny and enjoyable and not close enough of long or unnessessary.

After dealing with tomorrow's business, you can be sure I'll be back stalking your other stories to see if I'd find something equally yummy ;)
person Mieren
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I love 1x2x5 fics. And it's about time that Duo wasn't the smallest one. ^_^

But after that nice lemon, I must insist on another chapter, or at least a side fic. I want a story on that 'bad hair week'!!! I'm guessing that Duo got tangled up with a hair drier (I've done that... it sucks). Wufei... I'm guessing that he was teased about long hair and looking like an onna. But Heero? How in blazes did he get *pink* hair??? I must know!!!
person kari
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wah! You are a god! You are wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a good wufei-centric fic! I love you!!

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