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for Yoedian Arl

by Memme

schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm thrilled that you're as taken by your story as the rest of us because I always worry that the author won't continue a chaptered story, especially one as wonderful as this. The suffering of those poor sailors is almost heart-breaking, but I was relieved when the captain rescued our dear Quatre. The imagery was again so vivid I could see the entire installment in my mind. I hope that Quatre can find a savior or freedom (I am a die-hard 3x4 fan and hoping immensely they can find love and/or calm in each other), and I am very much anticipating the next chapter. I also hope Duo, Heero, and Wufei can find some form of closure or resolution to the situation that has been slowly killing them all (emotional deaths are the most tragic, I think). Beautiful, wonderful, captivating, breathtaking, intense... those are just a few words that come to mind when I think of your work. All I can say is thank you. Truly.
person Fallen Angel
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely installment! Your characterization is wonderful, and for some reason it made me smile thinking of Trowa as a stowaway and 'owning the place' as soon as he made his presence known. It was so perfectly 'Trowa'. I love that about him, how he can just blend into any background and take charge as necessary; he's my standard for the strong, silent Adonis type - a word I have used to describe him myself. On that note, your descriptions were fantastic, as always, and the story has a perfect flow that again swept me away (I was in complete awe again). I hope you update soon, though I keep ignoring my paperwork to indulge in your work. You'll always have a reader/reviewer in me - this story has become my office stress-relief! I can't thank you enough!
person Fallen Angel
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know I find this story incredibly captivating. It flows so beautifully, completely pulling you in, and I always seem instantly transported into this world you've created. I'm glad you have so much in the works, as I will be waiting in eager anticipation for your next updates! Beautifully done! The emotions are almost as overwhelming for me as they are for Quatre, and I can hardly wait to see where this goes. Thank you for sharing your amazing talents with us!

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