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I love how authors are always, like, "I want reviews! Gimme reviews! Tell me what you think?" And then they get a gods-honest review of what someone thinks about their writing - you know, other than, "I luv it! Write moar!"- and they tell people to keep their ideas to themselves, and to shut their faceholes. I dunno, just my opinion, but if you're posting something on the World Wide Web I'm gonna guess that you're not the only one out there and that tastes are going to differ. Also, I don't know if your mommy ever told you but you can't be loved by everyone. Also, just FYI, I hope you are of the age to realize that the only people you're going to amaze are those who have less experience than you do; meaning your writing is more than likely catering to people who are are YEARS your junior.

So. If your writing stinks like a rotten egg and you're posting something offensive to other people, well, hey! I'm gonna take a guess and say someone's going to post something just as offensive right back! Cause you're not the only person that thinks they have fantastic, brilliant brains and there are people who are older, more experienced, and have read a great deal about the subject you are writing about.

Just a little something for you and "Camaro" to chew on ;)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

crimson,

Hmm well since It is listed in Anime, assume you know that its about
Anime, and since it is listed as DBZ it is DBZ not something else,
So what I am wondering if you are bored with the characters? want other ones?

Perhaps being more specific? Like why would you tell me you are bored with DBZ inside of a DBZ fandom?

I have no problems with flamers, i appreciate all reviews, it makes me better, either by not caring or by
trying to correct my problems,

so what I really want to know is do you have a specific fandome you like and want me to write about it?

BEsides telling me I am boring you? Do you like LOTR, of Harry Potter, or Gravitation? or what?
I am on FF net, so my profile is there, you can read about what I like and write about ...
I have a forum there, that asks fans or just readers what they like about odd couples, and favorite plots just stuff...

If I was Camaro... I would say you are an inbred fucking idiot... But alas I am not so cruel...
But I do ask you be more specific...

I could understand how the feel of all the stories seem similar, I would love someone to tell me that , give me a clue
I get into different moods with each one... But it might not be reflected in the story...My problem might need a beta...

so tell me whats the deal?

Do you ever write anything other than DBZ? I'm starting to get a little bored. They're all read the same..

Wow very power chapers. so sad for them to lose their love ones like that. i hope some how Trunks can reach her, we all know how PAN CAN BE! can't wait to read more of this story.

Another good start. I hate that you killed off 2 characters right at the beginning, but it gives a great plot. I do hope that no one else has to die before Pan is happy.

it's simple. I want to read more. So, please, update. thanks.