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I look forwards to more ^^ hehe. It just keeps getting better and better

This is . . . amazing!

PLS. I BEG YOU POST THE NEXT CHAPTER QUICKLY! I'm so excited on will happan next!

...aww, poor Ed. D'= That's so sad. *sniffs* Great writting, but make it less sad!! .___.

I read what you said about giggling in Act One:Scene Two,I;m just like that,only I'm not a very good writer,so I usually giggle while reading yaoi,I've always wondered if I was weird for doing that,but then again,I am a schoolgirl,lol. Now I will paste a comment that I did on the last yaoi story I read.


I hate roy,so I never really cared for RoyxEd,and since I am in LOVE with Edward...I never really can stand reading even a whole chapter at one time,gotta take it in small doses,lol. Plus,it takes away some of the hotness when Edward actually WANTS to have sex with Roy.I liked it so much,I read 2 of the chapters in a roll,and I'm going to read the third one after I'm done with this review! ^_^ One weird thing I noticed is that,even if it's plain out sex,I find yoai funny @.@ I perfer Elricest,EdxAl,or AlxEd (I don't see the diffrence between EdxAl and AlxEd -_-; ) As you can tell,I love using faces! @_@;
For all you "children aren't mature enough!" people,I'M 11,and as you CAN SEE,I AM A VERY GOOD TYPER,AND I'M VERY GOOD AT GRAMMER! PLUS,I UNDERSTAND THE SERIES AND YAOI SO :P

I have a question,do you hate Roy? Because I have always hated him. For some reason,I think I'm actually IN LOVE with Ed,it's just his attitude,personality,and of course the obvious fact that Edward is hot. ^_~

Are you trying to depress and scare us with those sayings before the chapters?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? LMAO

"Light to Darkness, and Darkness to Light. They both lay within one another. As the dawn shines, shadows are cast, but in the black abyss, the light is hard to find." WTF? LOL XD

"As life become's shorter, the Darkness seems to grow. And growing, it starts to consume your very soul, until there is nothing left but your empty shell." Ok,I have always had depressment issues (I've even tried to kill myself before) but,damn your scaring me,I actually started to cry for no reason!

"In the Darkness, you try to reach out and find something to hold onto, but are met with reality as you do. There is no where there, just you." ......my stomach is twisting and turning....... '^';;

When's da next one coming??

POOR ED!! This chapter was so sad and Roy is just pure evil!!! I must read more. This story is so good! Evil Roy screwing over Ed's feelings! So sad! A few errors here and there but that did not stop the story at all cause it is that good. I cannot wait for the next chapter. *Sniffles* Roy you big evil meanie you raped Ed!!! update real soon!

OMG!!! That was so shocking reading about GASP!! Poor Ed!!! *Pulls the blonde in for a tight hug and cries hard on him* You poor poor sexy love sick guy!! You bastard Roy! Omg i am so hating him this very moment...feel a bit anger over at hawkeye too >> I was so shocked! And the chapter being short! gasp i fell of my chair when it ended there. OMG!! Poor Ed!!! *Cries a river on the blonde* Ed: O_o;;;;;

I am still shocked! GAH! I don't have the words to express how shocked i am!! You are a cruel cruel yet oh so talented yet cruel author! (Still love your work cause you are writting lovely) Update soon!! *Continues crying and gagging* Ed: -_-;;;;;