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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... poor Edo -huggles ed-
I love your story. PLEASE POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!
I love your story. PLEASE POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!
schedule
January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Roy you cruel cruel yet sexy but still cruel man! How can you do that to poor Ed!!?? Cheating on him especially with a woman ewwwwwwwwwww (That is so wrong XD)! Anyways i liked this chapter. Poor Ed. I wonder what shall happen next? Please update soon. ^^
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nuts no smut! Its fine i can wait. *Sits and whisltes waiting for the smut* Well it was a good chapter ^^ Cute when Roy offered Ed to sleep on his lap. Heh. Update soon.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot! The second chapter the format went all wonky but other then that i like it alot. Please update soon =3
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeep! Formatting errors! :O
Though the first chapter was hot enough :)
Though the first chapter was hot enough :)
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it ^-^6 but I noticed some things. The way you had your pergraphs confused the hell out of me. I thought that would be the end of a sentece but the same sentence was still going on in the other perigraph. You didn't do it in the other chapter though. But besides that I liked it
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enoyed it! Can't wait to read more. Great job ^^
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woooooo!....hell of a first chapter....stupid cliffhang-ish ending though :'( keep em commin though....and no more cliffhangers!!!! rawr