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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Great story! To be honest i hope u could update this story even if u don't get 10 reviews. Becos simply,i think u would get 10 reviews after u finished this story.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is good! I just love Kai/Ray pairing! ^_^ But you COULD change the tense you're writing at, usually it isn't in present tense, you could change it to past tense. Okay? I hope to see this one up very soon! *winks*
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was good. keep up the good work and update.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its a really good story! This I know is going somewhere good!! ^^ lol, but stoping here is a bad thing, write more!! *pleades* lol really good, can't wait to read the rest!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Wow that was a great start. I just adore Kai and Rei it is one of my favorite pairings, although I can\'t write them for anything. -sigh- Oh well reading yours is good enough! Catcha\' later.
-Kami
Wow that was a great start. I just adore Kai and Rei it is one of my favorite pairings, although I can\'t write them for anything. -sigh- Oh well reading yours is good enough! Catcha\' later.
-Kami
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ if i couls review ten times i would, but that wou;dn't be fait would it? updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!!! CX