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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Repeat spelling errors made it a bit hard to read.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a good story, I liked it. You should probably get a beta though to edit your mistakes and what not, than you\'re story would be even better. None the less, it was good.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it. some spelling errors, but nothing that cannot be taken care of with a beta reader. please update soon!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I like this so far. I wanna read more and fast!!!! Awesome first chapter. I'm really intrigued as to see how Heero will act *grins*