rate_review Reviews

Wow. What a cool story! I love seeing Trunks' dark side XD Very nice. I hope to see more from you!

I love it! Why? Because it's new and not normal? I'm not shure what I should say except that i like it and that it would be nice if you would update soon, very soon.
D.P.

This is awesome! I'm loving this twisted plot and Mirai Trunk seems so scary and dangerous, which makes for a real good read. Keep up the good work.

Well, I'm not quite sure if I like this or not, even though I love dark fictions. It's not that it's poorly written, and in fact, you had me entralled. The subject matter makes me uncomfortable as I"m sure it was intended to do. I must say that you have an excellent way of foreshadowing, and your ability to build up tension should be commended. Even working on my own dark fiction, I find that building up tension is rather difficult. It's a writing style that few have mastered.

When I saw that Camaro had recommended your fiction, I had to read it. I'll definitely be carrying along with you to find out what happens. You have great talent, and I'm pleased that you've chosen to show it here. FF.NET are a bunch of Nazi's. I thought about posting my fiction there out of spite. *LOL*

Anyways, great fiction, and I hope you continue with these same efforts.

i love your story. keep it coming i want to read more.

*does happy dance* another chapter yeah!!!
as much as i dislike the older trunks for what he intends to do i like the way you've written him, very dark, brings a new twist to the innocent and polite Trunks we all know.

Sex, sex, and more sex. Or I kill everyone with an asteroid. Life is a cruel mistress and I'm the hardcore bitch with the vibrator.

Yeah, wait, what?

I love it! Please update soon.

Fucking right! I like your attitude that you dispay in your a/ns. This is worth reviewing for sure.
Though the subject matter isn't my favorite by any means your writing is titilating. I cant even
imagine what awaits the readers.

By all means please continue!!

*ROFL* Why did you have to put those author's notes at the end? Now I've forgotten most of what I wanted to say!

Okay, the important part, I hope Vegeta does watch his back day, night... sleeps with one eye open. I don't think I would appreciate how MT made me feel either. *shudders*

As far as the touching goes with Bulma, I think it's going to take a bit before she catches on. The idea has got to be so foreign, it's amlost unthinkable.