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for The Mirai Trunks Complex

by amaterasuqueen

person Camaro
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey hey! What's up you?!

Well, I wanted to drop by, I know I've probably reviewed this like.. 8 times throughout the years I've known you but I will say to this day, it remains one of my ultimate favorite pieces of literature. It's a constant inspiration and incentive to go farther than you will! hahaha.. like a constant battle to out-do each other with the "too far-ness".

Yet, yours is still poetic and beautiful, the dialogue very human yet betraying in a few words what most people would struggle for chapters to express. You have that power and it exhaults you in every chapter. In a glance, you can speak novels through your characters.

They're so complex. I can't call them 3D or 4D or anything of the sort. They're an entirely different creation when you put your heart into them. I dare say, I think they're just about as complicated as you are, or perhaps, in some ways, perspectives of you that you've subconsciously inculcated into characters.


You're truly amazing you know that? Someday, this world will kneel for your talent.. I mean that. Years of loving and hating you and one thing remains the same. You are an absolute fucking artist at what you do.

This story grasps that. I can't wait to see what you have in store babe.

Camaro
person Macha
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT.... Bunnie Girl! And here I had given up all hope on this twisted story. *BIG GRIN* Glad to see your posting it here at AFF.

I'll save longer reviews for the parts I haven't read yet.
person ninjakitty
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if this is the story i started reading on ff.net i can't wait to read this. i never got to the end of the other so please update soon.

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