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Over? Damn but it was fun too

I've never reviewed any story before but had to register and review this one - it was amazing! That was so different and dark. Thank you so much, you've kept me on the edge of my seat, and I can't wait for your next story.

Well, not the ending I was hoping for - but I do kind of like the abruptness all the same. Writing that surprises me is better than writing that doesn't, no matter whether I like where it went or not. It's a good finish to a roller-coaster fic, and I hope you're proud of it. Not a lot of writers would have had the guts to do that.

i think ppl are missing the 'THE END' at the end, i don't think the author is going to be adding to this

:) I love this ending SO MUCH! Piccolo was so egotistical he became stupid, and paid DEARLY for it.

MWuahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah

YAY!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG IVE BEEN MINDFUCKED! OMG YOU ARE GOOD! THIS IS GOING TO RESOUND IN MY MIND FOR FUCKING YEARS MAN! HOLYSHIT! I AM I RAGE OF EMOTIONS! IDK WHAT THE FUCK TO DO WITH MYSELF. IM TOTALLY HOME ALONE AND I'VE BEEN QUITE TRUTHFULLY AND GENUINELY SCREAMING. THIS IS BY FAR...THE MOST MINDFUCKED IVE BEEN. I BOW TO YOU AND YOUR ABILITY TO WRITE SUCH AN UNDERTAKING. THIS WILL FUCKING HAUNT ME FOREVER. XD FUCKING GREAT JOB! I BOW IN AWE AND WONDER OF YOU! AMAZING AND TOTALLY ENTHRALLING!!! ...Im gonna pass out now and see if my mind recovers from such intellectual mindfucking rape of the brain XD

LATER. ROGUEFURY

*utter shock*

You... you... are far more evil than the saiyans AND Piccolo. I_I Evil I say.

Well hell, I didn't expect that! Nope, didn't see that at all, nicely done! Poor Piccolo, he should never expect loyalty from those who honestly pledge to another. Plus evil people turn on each other, it's in the handbook. ;-)) Now I'm practically salivating waiting for the next chapter!

Holy crap, now that was a twist. ^^ Thankyou for updating - and for keeping me so far up on my toes. I knew something strange would happen sooner or later, but I didn't really expect it to come from Raditz...or did it? This is really a great cliffhanger; you leave us unsure even of what's actually happened. It's beyond a nice touch.

wow...WOW...they're so sneaky. this was the "plan" i assume. they're gonna kill piccolo, nice twist. i never would have guess that this was gonna happen.