rate_review Reviews

MAN, what a cliffhanger! I've been loving this story since I first saw it, and it's only getting better. I love how you tackled the POV of a darker Piccolo, the kind we first met in Dragonball and early DBZ. Your work with Raditz, whom we just haven't seen a lot of in the series, has been outstanding. And, I have to admit, I love what you've done with Nappa. NAPPA, of all people! That's a flat character if I've ever seen one, but you manage to give him some level of depth here. And of course...it has to be said...I'm eager to see what happens with Zarbon...and with Vegeta, naturally. Thanks for updating!

JOY!!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATE! OMG; I'VE BEEN DYING FOR THIS UPDATE! Exquisite writing as usual. I really love how you kept the Saiyans in character while still having Piccolo control them. This was so good. Piccolo is such an incredible bastard, and I can't wait for the next update and to see what he does to Vegeta!!
LATER. ROGUEFURY

"Son Goku seems protective of the creature, but when he says the thing’s name, I nearly scream in rage. Gohan?! He named the brat Gohan! Rice! He knows how I feel about that word – he must. After all, my sire was trapped for ages in a rice cooker."

Best line ever. Awesome fic thus far.

I can't wait until they meet Frieza again! Another brilliant chapter, well done!

Ah, so Veggie's still alive. Whew, bit of an intense chapter again. But then, the whole story's pretty intense.
Oh, I'd love seeing Piccolo kill Frieza.. or Zarbon and Dodo-brains first.
Heheh... evil Piccolo is so cool... And I'd love a Raditz pet too =P

OH.MY.GOODNESS!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO HAWT! SO HAWT! MY BRAIN! MELTING!!! Piccolo in control is such a huge turn on! THE BIGGEST KUDOS TO YOU, FOR LEAVING HIM IN THE FINEST OF CHARACTER WHILE MAINTAINING HIS SEXINESS! *bows* CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!

It seems like Vegeta and Nappa aren't able to swallow their pride for a green man. A broken back can be healed by the senzu, but it's a bit of a cliffy if Vegeta can survive that, unless he's quick with the senzu.
But then, Nappa might piss off Piccolo soon enough anyway to kill him off for good. Vegeta could serve Frieza, but to do the same for another master again, and one that he apparently can't defeat...
Seems like Radditz is the smartest one between them after all. Or just knows you can't live on pride.
Anywayz, I think I said before, but I really like this story. It's very well-written and the content is of course very cool. Hard core, heheh... Yeah, it's cool ^_^" so definitely, keep it up.

Yay! The other sayajins are introduced!!! I can't wait for future chapters and see how Piccalo faces Frieza. xx

*whines* Vegeta! Now is NOT the time to be stubborn!!!!! *sighs*


Okay, this has got to be the best line in this chapter:

He smiles. “I wish to be close to your power.” No wonder the monkey is still alive. He kisses ass because he thinks it is fun.


hehehehehehehehehe


Excellent chapter Pix. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!

OMFG THAT WAS EXQUISITE! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! I love the dialogue, and the description is just right! This is the best Piccolo yaoi fic I've ever read!