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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oozaru sex....!
I wonder how many people were squished when Piccolo\'s head hit the ground? ...and how many more are horrified that the one being...subjugated...is their infamous King Piccolo? ...and if the giant wereape can do that to him...what of them?
The king\'s freakish nature has gotten him into a world of trouble... wonder if he regrets killing goku now? and since he and Kami are linked...if he dies - Kami dies...did Kami feel the jolt when his antennae was yanked out? a headache, blindness in one eye? something? ...and since they are linked... I wonder if Popo is getting a frisky show up at the lookout? Kami\'s got to be at least a little horny... no one\'s that dead!
Hot and steamy !!
I wonder how many people were squished when Piccolo\'s head hit the ground? ...and how many more are horrified that the one being...subjugated...is their infamous King Piccolo? ...and if the giant wereape can do that to him...what of them?
The king\'s freakish nature has gotten him into a world of trouble... wonder if he regrets killing goku now? and since he and Kami are linked...if he dies - Kami dies...did Kami feel the jolt when his antennae was yanked out? a headache, blindness in one eye? something? ...and since they are linked... I wonder if Popo is getting a frisky show up at the lookout? Kami\'s got to be at least a little horny... no one\'s that dead!
Hot and steamy !!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn, that was a fun ride. anymore? please?
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting change from the original plotline, and appropriately blunt and shockingly to the point.
This is evil, mean and nasty stuff.
I guess that's what you get when you let Piccolo talk in your head. ;)
This is evil, mean and nasty stuff.
I guess that's what you get when you let Piccolo talk in your head. ;)
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! PICCOLO IS SUCH A HOT BITCH! I like how you made him a believable bitch, since I usually am skeptical about it. So, YEAH! GIVE ME MORE! Love it so much so far, even the brutal bloody stuff =3 Im a freak
LATER. ROGUEFURY
LATER. ROGUEFURY
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! You're not pulling any punches are you? Both Goku AND Gohan? Yikes!
Well, now, you've just united the two most evil beings on earth, earth's heros are dead and . . . ? You simply must update! How can you leave us in this predicament. It's EVIL. *grins* I love it!
Well, now, you've just united the two most evil beings on earth, earth's heros are dead and . . . ? You simply must update! How can you leave us in this predicament. It's EVIL. *grins* I love it!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well no matter how many times I see it...the outcome's always the same: Goku is still stupid enough to stand in front of that blast!
And Piccolo blasts him!!! NUFF SAID!!
Heck it would have been fun to see his interaction with the rest of the bunch when they arrived, but hey... that's what dragonballs are for...! NOT!!!
Damn Piccolo...had no idea you were such a ... FREAK!!! [got off on his gettin' off]
The Dangerous Sexy Saiyans should have plenty of fun with him! He is a FREAK! Fiendishly so! Wow!!! To quote a famous song:
He's a super freak! a super freak! he's super freaky!!! Yeah!!
I see Piccolo is a practitioner of the FOUR F's....[oops! getting ahead of myself...more on this later...]
Excellent as always! ~_^!
Heck it would have been fun to see his interaction with the rest of the bunch when they arrived, but hey... that's what dragonballs are for...! NOT!!!
The Dangerous Sexy Saiyans should have plenty of fun with him! He is a FREAK! Fiendishly so! Wow!!! To quote a famous song:
I see Piccolo is a practitioner of the FOUR F's....[oops! getting ahead of myself...more on this later...]
Excellent as always! ~_^!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally got a few minutes to start this. Only got through chapter 1, but 'ness! *fans face* And what a fascinating setup! I know it's going to be interesting seeing how you make these two interact . . . vertically. :D
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*SOBS* No, it didn't turn out well for the Son's at all. *sniffle* I always did wonder what would happen if Piccolo had been able to beat/kill Goku... I guess I'll find out in what remains of this excellently written A/U story.
*SOBS*
*SOBS*
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I really like this story so far. Well, I like Piccolo before Gohan's boy scout influence on him during his training. And of course, I love Raditz. They indeed do make a good match, in attitudes anyway.
You know, I always found that quite strange as well, how they go on in DBZ that Goku would never kill anyone, and he himself nags about not killing people, while it never bothered him in Dragonball. All of the Red Ribbon Army, the demons, Piccolo Sr., etc. Also that he even commits suicide to kill his brother, while he does everything he can to let Frieza stay alive. When he left Frieza there, and he even gave power up to him, I really thought "Okay, now I fucking don't get it anymore." Okay, sorry for the rant.
Anyway, great story and can't wait to see more of it. Keep it up!
You know, I always found that quite strange as well, how they go on in DBZ that Goku would never kill anyone, and he himself nags about not killing people, while it never bothered him in Dragonball. All of the Red Ribbon Army, the demons, Piccolo Sr., etc. Also that he even commits suicide to kill his brother, while he does everything he can to let Frieza stay alive. When he left Frieza there, and he even gave power up to him, I really thought "Okay, now I fucking don't get it anymore." Okay, sorry for the rant.
Anyway, great story and can't wait to see more of it. Keep it up!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this Piccolo calling them~especially Roshi~ the hippocrites that they are. And his reaction to Gohan's name ~RICE?!: PRICELESS!!!
Now for Goku: What fool is stupid enough to stand in one spot, hold his brother and allow his sworn enemy to fulfill his word and kill them while killing him? GOKU! That's who!
hmm...I wonder if he gets blowed up~as in shot full of holes~ this time?
[PG: In an insane moment a muse blew in my ear and I kinda sketched their encounter in chapter one. Soon as I get it scanned I'll send it to you...~_^!]
Now for Goku: What fool is stupid enough to stand in one spot, hold his brother and allow his sworn enemy to fulfill his word and kill them while killing him? GOKU! That's who!
[PG: In an insane moment a muse blew in my ear and I kinda sketched their encounter in chapter one. Soon as I get it scanned I'll send it to you...~_^!]