rate_review Reviews

*covers eyes in dread* It didn't work out so well for Goku in the original time line when Piccolo really was being his ally. What's going to happen this time? AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh..... I think he's bitten off more than he can chew. *sobs*

You've kept Radditz and Piccolo's characters very IC. I didn't realize how funny they were for villians.

hehe... Like Paul Harvey says..."and now the REST of the story." As usual superb writing. You pull pull off present tense which usually annoys me for some reason. I can see this becoming deeply disturbing... pull no punches.

I've said it before, and I'll say it again...

I absolutely love this story!! Not only the characterization and storytelling but the entire concept! This is certainly going into my favs. I know you're busy but update when you get a chance, I have a feeling I'll be searching for this one on a regular basis.


Evil Piccolo rocks!

*happy dance*

Luv it! LUV IT! LOVE IT!

Piccolo has always been a real bastard... and now someone has the balls to write it....

...and Radditz? THREE TIMES??? What a... bastard!

Damn, PG! I'm drooling already... I can't wait to read more!

~anz~

H O T ! ~ H O T ! ~ H O T !

Ah.... Piccolo certainly has lofty plans. 'I will rule.' To bad he not only has to worry about Goku fouling them up, now he has Radditz in his way.

Hmmmm Piccolo/Radditz... Never thought about, but I like the way you are writing it.

I've been waiting for a good, and PLAUSIBLE version of this to come along for a while. I LOVE how you did this, and the characters weren't too OOC either- they were rather spot on. I absolutely love what you did with this, and if there is anymore to come- then I will relish the reading. I'd love to attempt some fanart of this for you ^^