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for Lil' Red Riding Hood

by chinohana

person cutenekojin
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a VERY and I mean very MEAN person!! What were uou thinkin stopping it there!!?? Ahhh!! Now I am going to die waiting infront of my stupid computer!! XD Lol I am adding just a tiny bit of egageration here...erm...REALLY good story, can't wait to read more, keep up the awsome work!
~cutenekojin
person brittany
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MAKE IT LONGER!!! YOU'RE KILLING ME!! UPDATE AND MAKE IT LONGER!!!!!
person Pyro-Neko
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*growls angerly* You have nothing to lose eh? Well, I think you've got something to lose...*pulls out flame thrower* YOUR LIFE!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

*glare* I am not happy. I WANT A HOT KAI/REI LEMON RIGHT NOW!!!!! SO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person cutenekojin
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww!! Rei looks so cute like that, and Kai just looks H.O.T hot!! Lol, this looks so promasing!! *waits infront of her computer until hana-chan writes other chapter* yeah I have a feeling that waiting like that will be long, but comming tomorrow wont! ;) Yey! Really great story so far, keep up that fantastique work! Oh and just loved how you used moi work XD I am french, j'aime se que tu ecrit! XOXOX

~cutenekojin
person brittany
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know what was inside*whispers kai* i bet that's right update so i can see if i am right.Update!
person Rigel
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sexy! I just love the idea of Kai seducing Rei >w
person brittany
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Update!
person Mourir
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not what I was expecting, but it did explain why Kai was familiar to Rei in the first chapter.

Rei is so innocent. I want one ;o;

Kai makes me laugh like nobody's business *hearts*
person Rigel
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far I'm loving it... it's a cute parody and, hey... it has Kai perving over Rei. One can't complain >D
person Mourir
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really want to know what happens next!!!

I adore how you adopted a storytelling tone with this story. It's very well-suiting.

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