rate_review Reviews

Little error there. When Roy asked "...are you a virgin?", the answer should have been "Yes."

Other than that it was ok.

That was hot. Loved it till te end. Great job ^^

~Ed snorted, "Sure, why not?...~ Lmao, that was the best line. After that little speech he just casually tossed it off like that. This was pretty good, I'm glad I read it. Will there be more? I do have one comment. When Roy asked Ed if he was a virgin, Ed should have said yes instead of no because it then goes on to describe how Roy was his first and all. Besides that, though, it was great. Good job!

awesome!