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for Pandora Effect

by milky

person Ari
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you, damn it. This is so freaking hilarious, and so like me and my RP Ed that I'll be grinning for hours. (Yes, we RP Elricest, almost daily, and they function JUST LIKE THIS.)
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome- just- awesome.

Fantastic job- I love how long you made us wait.

Perfect.
person Snoopy
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quote:…persistent to the point of demanding immediate castration
that was pretty funny such a pity you dont own the elric boys
the fun you could have with them.....
anyway once more a great fic keep them coming
person MultifacetedTune
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Adorable, simple and absolutely adorable!!! Very creative, cute, and well done -- I loved your characterizations and the way you described the interaction between those two. Wonderful job -- keep up the good work!!!
person victoria
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! You are an exceptional writer
Will there be another update - or will you break my heart?
person Artemis, Goddess of the Night
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD XD XD That was AMAZING. I read the entire thing, and enjoyed every moment of it. Keep up the awesome work-- do more Elrincest! (Please?)
person AmandaFields
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I read all 4 chapters,and they were hilarious,the endings for the chapters were always funny as hel*! Nice spelling and use of words,too.
person ibshafer
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I LOVED this! Having read "Glamour in Pink" (a couple times, actually!) it SO followed the mood, fleshing it out even more.

I love the insights into Edward, too. The idea that all that aggression we're so used to seeing is just his unused libido channeled into something (more useful?) else. I love the idea of pointing him in one direction and letting it run its course... Hysterical.

Really, quite loved this.

Would you consider fleshing out other doujinshi? Seriously. Been thinking for a while that'd be a fun project.

Would love to see what you could do with Boku no Kachi...


~I~
person Deity
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. I loved it, and it all seems really... plausible I think is the right word for it... Anyway, I feel head over heals for it and it was beautifully written. I didn't see, or I didn't pay attention, to any mistakes in it. ^_^ Wonderful job and keep up the good work on all future stories or whatever that you do. Until then, though, Bye! ^_^
person ibshafer
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I liked! I liked!

Loved the humor and the science and the way Alphonse Takes Charge. Loved that I could See Edward, see all of it. Loved the hints at how it all started (hints of another doujinshi, Boku Dake no Niisan, maybe?) and all the things he feels for his brother - the good and the not so.

You're one of my favorite fic writers, milky. You don't get nearly enough reviews, but *I* certainly appreciate the skill you bring to each story, your insight into these characters, the way you make me rethink things I thought I knew. I am always thrilled to come to this site and find fresh work from you.

'S funny. I was talking with a friend about how for yaoi fic, we tend to like the RoyXEd pairing, because most of it is based on some real feeling between them, while for doujinshi, *I*, anyway, tend to really like the Elricest, because, hey - they *already* love each other. The opposites are usually true when you switch 'em - RoyXEd doujinshi is often centered around an initially reluctant Edward, no so WAFF, while some of the Elricest fanfiction I've read has just not felt Right. You, my dear, give the best of both worlds.

So - Bravo to you, and yay for us.

~I~

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