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Ah, this is a fun time, this is a very fun time. It's over. And ende perfectly. Words. Um, yeah. So, yeah, I found it incredibly entertaining and stuff. Not much else to say, really. Oh, but a double-date with Tala and Bryan or a triple with them and Max and Hillary sounds interesting. Though, I think it'd be hard because of the dialogue and stuff. You know, you're probably one of the few authors I know of that actually mention that, outside of the Beyblade fanfic universe, guys being attracted to guys usually isn't accepted. So, congrats. Keep it up and I'll probably have something to read for the rest of the semester.

Hey, that's a little suspenseful. So, I'm guessing since there's two more chaptors, that Kai ends up saying all that fluffy confession stuff, then they kiss, then it turns out that it doesn't actually break the spell and a little more crap comes up or all goes well and the last chaptor is the epilogue. Wow, I've never actually made a hypothesis under my own will. Oh well. Onwards to chaptor... six? Yeah, I think so.

Hey! So, it happened and we can all just go home happy, hn? Yeah, that's fun. You know, I'm happy that Kai actually shows some human emotion in here, or rather, in most of your fics. Yeah... So, uhh, yeah, it was incredibly entertaining and, uh, yeah. Now, what's behind door number seven.

Well, that was interesting. You know, most people would think that someone would be terrified if they suddenly lost their vision or ability to speal. Although... Yeah, so, anyways it was entertaining. I'm not much a fan of the whole spiritual stuff. Well, ouija board and all that stuff, to be exact. Especially since to ghost's supposed to be Daichi. But what ever. It's been fun until here and it'll probably still keep me occupied for a while so congrats. Now, onward to chaptor... five? Yeah. It'll be really awkward if Kai kisses Tyson in the end, though.

Ah, that seemed a little awkward. Costumes are always are for me to think of. Especially ones for the antisocial guys like Tala and Bryan. So, an angel and a munk? That's amazingly inaccurate, but, of course, that's what makes it fun. You know, it kind of seems embarrassing for some of them, really. I mean, since Tyson's a sailor and Kenny's a scientist and then there's Bryan who, I'd imagine, looked something like a hobo. I don't know, costumes aren't my thing. But it seems pretty fun. I didn't know highschoolers dressed up. I live under a rock... But, hey, there's a people staying, so that seems like it'll be interesting.

Yeah, so, that's about it. Oh, and is Gregory actually Kai's butler? He's never actually mentioned as a specific character in any other story I've read written by anyone else.

Oh, so, that was another fun chaptor. The polker game would have been a little more interesting if it carried on. Though, I've no idea how to play it so, yeah... But it was fun. Then there was a couple other things. It's too bad that Tyson's now... a sleap? Or something because it would have been fun to have a horror movie marathon. And you just had to get rid of everyone. Well, even if it was only for a short time, it kind of bugged me. Two way conversations always seem to bug me. Whatever. I guess it can only become more interesting from here.

Hey, another interestin fic. It's nice how they're not all at each other's throats or something and don't have specific ranks and stuff. That'd probably be kind of... awkward(?). Yeah. So, Tyson as a sailor, huh? Well, that seems a little embarrassing. And then Tala and Bryan'll be there. Ouch. Oh, well. It'll be fun to see what happens. Oh, and Hilary Tala's cousin. That's a little interesting. Though, I could've sworn I'd at some point thought of that, too. But that was probably some... what? Four years ago? Whatever. Carrying on to chaptor two.

Awesome job! I love your fics!
This one is pretty neat XD I like the Hershey kisses being the most valuable chips XD
-sigh- ^u^ yay for TyKai love n.n <3

*squeals like an insane fangirl* that was just to cute!! *squeals some more*
i love keityson they are just perfect for eachother!!
i so need to read the sequel!!

Yay! Awesome end to an awesome story. Great job, you should feel proud! Keep it up!