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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story, and I suppose it's a one-shot, but it's really good anyway. The teen Raditz was really cute. And they do make a good couple, heheh.
By the way, your explanation about peroxide seems right, but you said it contains an extra hydrogen atom compared to water, while it's actually an oxide atom. Per-oxide means one oxide atom too much. The structure is H2O2. It is indeed unstable like you said, and it will easily split in water, and I believe the radical atom oxide, which will then react to oxygen. I'm not trying to fret though, I just wanted to notify you about this. Of course, I'm not a chemistry professor or anything, just a chemistry student, so... I'm of course open to discussion.
Anyway, sorry about that, if it annoys you, didn't really want to rant or so. The story is really great, no matter what anyway.
By the way, your explanation about peroxide seems right, but you said it contains an extra hydrogen atom compared to water, while it's actually an oxide atom. Per-oxide means one oxide atom too much. The structure is H2O2. It is indeed unstable like you said, and it will easily split in water, and I believe the radical atom oxide, which will then react to oxygen. I'm not trying to fret though, I just wanted to notify you about this. Of course, I'm not a chemistry professor or anything, just a chemistry student, so... I'm of course open to discussion.
Anyway, sorry about that, if it annoys you, didn't really want to rant or so. The story is really great, no matter what anyway.
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please add another chapter soon.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YATTA! *grins* AS i mentioned...super good story! *huggles* Sorry again about taking so long but at least i got your 'first review cherry'! *POP*!!
lmao! *grins* Keep up the good work! I always look foward to your writing!
Hella ^_^ V
lmao! *grins* Keep up the good work! I always look foward to your writing!
Hella ^_^ V