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Ohhh this doesn't seem oveeerrr! Can't wait to read more!

Yay~ <3
Thank you for updating. Been waiting for the newest chapters to come out. I MUST appoint your writing style ^_~ Bestest Havoc yaoi fic EVAH! Hee. Hope you update again soon ^^
Ja.

I felt like cheering out when Roy got Archer in the groin. That was great. He definitely doesn't seem much like the knight in shining armor, but I think it works just the same, such a nice visual of Roy with his coat off and sleeves rolled up. I loved Havoc watching through the entire thing, cheering Roy on though his better judgement told him not to.

This is such a heartbreaking and difficult story but I just couldn't stop reading it because despite the difficult subject it's a really good story. The way that Havoc is going back and forth through all the different emotions such as wanting no one to touch him, to wanting to cling to Mustang was very telling. One other part that struck me was when Havoc kissed Mustang, getting to see his thoughts about him needing to be in control for once and be the aggressor was very insightful. I look forward to the rest of the story and seeing how it unfolds, I can't help but feel that by beating up Archer, Mustang played right into his hand.

In case you didn't know you posted ch.12 twice, thought I should tell in case there's a ch.13 we should have gotten :)

Uh oh. As charming as Archer getting his ass kicked is, what does the little bug have planned?

Omfg, this is the sickest story i've ever read o.O and i absolutely FELL IN LOVE with it!!! Archer is very very VERY sadistic! My most favoritist lieutenant is being manhandled in the most vicious way possible and Roy looks like he's gonna take down all of Amestris if he doesn't kill Archer!
Hoooooly, i am praying to my sex god right now for the next chapter. T.T Plz update asap? ^^
......Havoc's hot.

I seriously think that Mustang needs to be smacked upside the head and Havoc should be the one to do it! Although it was nice to see Havoc show a little strength in ch.9, he just needs to remind himself that he's strong and will be able to deal with this. It was interesting to see he was still worried about leaving Mustang with Archer even after what had happened, so maybe the trust isn't entirely broken between the two. I really like the way that your dealing with this story and situation so far, it's not an easy topic so I can't wait to see what happens next :)

SOO awkward! Poor guys. But it's good that Jean realizes he isn't weak and doesn't have to take that kind of crap.

That's realyl fucked up. In a good way, certainly, and very well written. I'd forgotten about this one, I'm glad to see it continued.

i haven't read many FMA fics, but wow... this story is really good. please continue!!!