rate_review Reviews

Honestly when it comes to stories like this I tend to click on it with one hand covering my eyes because they're just so hard to read. Also how a writer handles the situation after the incident is really important and so far I think you've handled that well. The part with the blood on the floor was very telling of how damaged Havoc is (and how cruel Archer is) and shows that this is not something that will be fixed in a short time.
I must admit I was hoping Mustang would do a little more damage (like lighting Archer's hair on fire) especially after the things that Archer said, it'll be interesting to see what he has planned for him. I think now that Mustang knows the game Archer might be in for a rough time, at least I hope so! I admit I also want to see how Mustang helps Havoc but that could just be because they're my favourite pairing-can't wait for an update!

This is a wonderful start for a dark story!! I love it!! Please continue soon! I look forward to reading more! Keep up the good work!!

That Archer is one sick fuck.

Fine story...

looking forward to more.

Must. Know. What. Happens. Next.
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Oh dear, don't you dare tos top here or I'll do something totally demented and Archerist. [smiles sadistically] So real so Havoc.