rate_review Reviews

The most well written fma story I've read. Quite possibly one of the best on the site.

extremely well written.

Great story. You talk alot about editing, but I think it's good just the way it is.
Keep up the good work!

A little late to type this ::shrugs::, but what ever. Risembool and Alfons Heiderich, does that help? I hope so. <<

I'm not as good at this reviewing business as others are. The ones who can actually say something cogent and interesting. All I can say is, I liked this quite a bit - it has adventure, suspense, tragedy - the sex is all icing on the story cake. I studied very hard the way you wrote the lemon scene, and I felt you struck a good balance between the nervous tension, the dialogue, and the really smutty bits. I tend to be too "clinical" when I write lemon scenes, and I am hoping reading sex scenes by better authors will help me improve my sex writing.

This was a wonderful story, very excellent detail, I loved it!:)

Yeah, I read this story a long time ago... before I reviewed every story, but I like to think that I've changed my ways (lol). So since I did not give a review before, I will now because I remember your story especially. It is beautifully written, and I love how it comes together in the end. Wonderful. ^^ Well, do write more, won't you? :) (:

Ok, first off, I'd like to say I'm pissed to no end that there are no review for this thus far....It's AWESOME. Not quite as good as your Vincent Comes Home, but hell, it's a VERY close second. Just something I noticed during the third chapter, is I believe it's Equivalent Exchange, not Equivalent Trade. Other than that, MORE!!