rate_review Reviews

I remember reading this story years ago when it was one of the very first Piccolo-centric lemons I had ever read. Back then I found it imaginative and indescribably erotic, having read it again several years later I must say that I still find it to possess both qualities. Even now I would be thrilled for it to continue into a two-part short, but I can be content with the jem you have so kindly presented your readers with. It's a few years later, but I just had to give my metaphorical thumbs-up for the story, and the nostalgia it inspired in me while reading it.

Brava,
Raptured Night

I'm not a huge fan of one-shots but this isn't bad. I honestly stopped reading after you forced Piccolo to have a foreskin but I won't allow this to be a total flame. I appreciate you giving credit to an original character.

OMFG!!! THIS WAS SOOOOOOO GOOOOOD! WHY DIDN\'T YOU MAKE IT LONGER!?!?!?!????? I WANT TO SEE PICCOLO DOMINATE!!! *twitches in delight* Piccolo is my NAWTY GOD OF YUMMINESS!!!!! I BOW TO YOU!!!!!

LATER.ROGUEFURY

Damn Arctica doesn\'t go for half measures now does she?
An intresting premis chapter

That was wonderful! I am a Believer as well! :)

Another Cyndi (and of course Piccolo) fan,

~ Ami

This story was deliciously arousing. I just adore Piccolo lemons. Yours was especially delicious. You have a \"then\" \"than\" confusion. That was a little annoying, but other than that, this story rocked.

I first read this fic a LONG time ago on FF.net, long before the NC-17 ban. I loved it then, and I still love it now!!! ALL HAIL THE THE PICCOLO LEMONS!!! I just love Piccolo ^.^