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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was funny!
duo: why did she make me act that way at the end? i really wanted to use those cuffs
shikaru: my god.....i can get hee-chan to come over tonight after he gets done shopping at spencers
duo: wee! more fun
shikaru:*sweatdrop*
duo: why did she make me act that way at the end? i really wanted to use those cuffs
shikaru: my god.....i can get hee-chan to come over tonight after he gets done shopping at spencers
duo: wee! more fun
shikaru:*sweatdrop*
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe very nicely written. not to explicit and not to under-explicit i liked it ^_^
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...gee this sounds familiar i wonder who you got some of the ideas from? *winks at ya*
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm...yeah bro\'s right...it does sound oddly familiar..but pretty well written
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-i blush deeply- not bad i say hehe.... >_> my mate seems to agree ~^_^~
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe i think we all agree that it\'s pretty good ^.^ might wanan lengthen the first chapter a little and add spaces in the final chapter a little more but overall good work >thumbs up<
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good but needed to be longer