rate_review Reviews

This story is excellent. I wish there was more to read or at least more like it.

Wow, you made Piccolo like a call-guy, demon/slug sex on tap lol. Too bad he couldn't stay for some aftersex cuddling but I guess he's got more fan girls to pleasure in the night!

Very steamy scene. I give it An 8/10

If I never said it before... I love this story and I have read it several times. That is unusual for me. Period. Still... I love your POV in this story and will attempt myself one day. Another subject , yes... but this piece is inspiring despite what anyone may or may not say. Bravo!

OOoooooooo..........YEAH BABY! THAT\'S what I\'M talkin\' about! Ho-ahh! Yes...That\'s my fantasy!! YES!!! Sorry....Had to let that out! hehe *blushes*

oO whoa that was hot

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Damn...

^^ Kitty likes!

Yay for all that is green and sexy!

OH MY GOD!!! I FOUND YOUR STUFF, AFTER LOOKING FOREVER I FOUND THIS STORY!!!! I REALLY hope you upload \"Forest of Desire\"!! PLEASE PUT IT BACK UP!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish you were still writing those impeccable and NAWTY fics. Please email me and tell me how you\'re doing ^0^~ I became an author on FF.NET after deciding to put my own shit out there. I really hope you could give me your own input on it and leave me a review of whether I suck or not >=)

I got an AIM account under the pseudonym roguefury1 and you can also find me on MSN Windows Messenger. PLEASE UPLOAD YOUR STORY!! I LOVED IT WHEN I READ IT A YEAR AGO AND STILL MELT WHEN I READ \"Demon in the Night\". Hope your doing well and that you\'re still a Piccolo fangirl like Cyndi and myself!

PLEASE EMAIL ME WITH A REPLY, I WOULD BE SO HAPPY AND HONORED!

LATER.ROGUEFURY

Hey! I\'m a believer too!! (known as \"Piccolo\'s Love Slave\" on ff.net) This is a great little piece! sooo sexy! *mmm...drools over the green flesh*

Awesome awesome awesome work!!

From another hardcore believer,

~Ami

OMG! OMG! I can\'t breathe after reading this! I\'ve never seen a fanfic written in this format before! I can\'t even see straight right now, this story excited me so much. I seriously felt and saw and heard everything you wrote and I do hope this story gets a lot of positive reviews. This is what a lemon should be like! You even had Piccolo in character...even if it was a fantasy! Yum! That Namek IS SO SEXY!!!!

*Runs off to drool*

That.....was.....WOW!!! I feel like I just got laid by Piccolo! XD! I *demand* you to write more like this, it\'s fucking awesome!