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I really REALLY hope this gets updated someday. I've been reading your stories since 2004, and I don't know if you even check this profile anymore or not, but I never tire of your writings. Everything is just...just so--GAH! It's like being catapulted into a new world, one where TRULY anything can happen, and you do it with one of the most unexpected fandoms. You take a simple series and turn it into a complex masterpiece. I'm rambling now, but seriously, I just had to get on and review once more how much I love everything you've done and tell how much it has affected me as a writer and a person.
Hope all is well,

JM

I love the way that you bring DBZ characters into deep human emotions and issues. I have only recently gotten into fan-fiction; some are worth reading and some aren't. Yours are, so I thank you. I hope you're still writing.

Please let there be more chapters. There's just so many twists and turns with your fic that I am utterly dumbfounded right now. Kakarrot, Goku, and Vegeta irritate me greatly, but this only hooks me in deeper. I NEED to find out what happens next. The morbid descriptions are still as eye catching as ever. There are so many questions I need to ask, but I believe reading on is the only way they can ever truely be answered. Wonderful job with the writing. I do hope you continue to update your works. (I'm a fan) The instability of the minds of your characters is absolutely enchanting. The human condintion is something that's always been pondered over, and anyone who's willing to express their own without fear of backlash is someone I can admire. Can't wait for the rest, if you plan to continue, of course. :) *hugs, blood, and chocolate*

where is the rest of the story, OMG so many plot twists I was so captivated edge of my seat awe struck by the boldness for one of this story, and yet it's to be expected of a Dragonball fic so much blood and gore you writers are crazy but crazy in a good way I love the way it was written with Goku telling his story and the different way the two Goku's thought it was great so awesome and so much truth behind it I'd hate to say it but I agree with Kakarot so much is wrong with the world and it'd be nice for some change but not that much change. The story was funny it was intense dramatic sexy, you know I didn't know Goku had that much sex appeal but you really brought it out i loved it!! I hope I get to know the rest of his story I'm hoping for a happy ending but I'll take anything. You have to finish, this story ROCKS!!!!

I'd forgotten how insane this Kakarott is. O.o

ok this story started out awesome and had my interest all the way to chapter 21,im sorry but that was a major let down,you cant be serious if that is your idea of a ending,i mean come on,for that you shouldnt have even posted the damn story

from the very start of this story you captured me..this has to be one of the best yaoi's ive ever read..but please tell me are you planning on finishing this story or are you going to leave it on a cliffhanger? anything you decide to do is cool..because the story itself is just "perfection"..

Just a reminder that we all still look forward to your updates.

Everyday.

Thanks for continuing as I thought it was the end last chapter!

I was really hoping Vegeta would see through Kakarot, after all the clues were there, but sadly he didn't until it was too late and he'd let his guard down. Pity.

So Kakarot has Vegeta as well now, how will they get out of this? Maybe they won't leaving Kakarot to rule the universe.

Ahhhh!

The wait is killing me.
I'm stuck on the edge of my seat!!!!