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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeee!! That was entirely too short! I'm glad you finally updated though ^.^ So wow... Vegeta has fallen victim to Kakarotto was well.... If things weren't bad before, they certainly are now. I wonder what Kakarotto's plans are now that he has TWO Saiyajins at his disposal.
I hope you continue this. I can think of a million different ways this fic can go, and I'm itching to see which path you take.
I hope you continue this. I can think of a million different ways this fic can go, and I'm itching to see which path you take.
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that you do not leaved this story!
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i kinda hoped that would be the end though. makes me feel like bad person for some reason. :x
part of me hopes there's going to be a 'happy' ending. and by happy i mean most the suffering will come to an end. i might be naive but not that naive. <__<
part of me hopes there's going to be a 'happy' ending. and by happy i mean most the suffering will come to an end. i might be naive but not that naive. <__<
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok guys, let's not be RUDE or anything. No, of course that's not the end of the story. Pfft.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh? That can't be the end, can it? But predictable Vegeta is boring! And that's a boring ending. You should make it exciting. =)
(But YAY for updating!!! So... How 'bout those other stories...?)
(But YAY for updating!!! So... How 'bout those other stories...?)
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* It's back and BETTER than I ever imagined. Poor Goku! Having to sit through it all, but I liked how he was able to see what Kakarott wasn't getting. Knowing Vegeta would have advantages, I suppose.
Now, after all the 'end of the story' I have to guess it isn't like Goku is dreading it is going to.
We shall see. :D Hopefully soon!
Now, after all the 'end of the story' I have to guess it isn't like Goku is dreading it is going to.
We shall see. :D Hopefully soon!
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....that better not be the end of the story. I will murder you in the worst possible way if it is!
I was getting worried that you weren't going to update this magnificant piece of work again, so I'm thrilled to see a new chapter! I feel so sorry for poor Goku though. He's forced to watch all this and unable to do a thing about it. I hope Vegeta catches on soon; I know he's smarter than that. Kakarot is just too different to pull off being Goku.
I was getting worried that you weren't going to update this magnificant piece of work again, so I'm thrilled to see a new chapter! I feel so sorry for poor Goku though. He's forced to watch all this and unable to do a thing about it. I hope Vegeta catches on soon; I know he's smarter than that. Kakarot is just too different to pull off being Goku.
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. Your story has really gotten me hooked. I started reading earlier today and haven't stopped since.
This is truly dark and twisted. Your writing along with your innovative ideas invoke so many emotions from the reader. The whole Bulma thing is really ...disturbing and the imagery around the gory parts is very...gross. I commend your twistedness and wonder how you sleep at night.
I'll understand if you take your time on the update-- you obviously put a lot of thought into this story and as a reader, I appreciate your dedication.
This is truly dark and twisted. Your writing along with your innovative ideas invoke so many emotions from the reader. The whole Bulma thing is really ...disturbing and the imagery around the gory parts is very...gross. I commend your twistedness and wonder how you sleep at night.
I'll understand if you take your time on the update-- you obviously put a lot of thought into this story and as a reader, I appreciate your dedication.
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brillient story, so dark and sad with many twists and turns. Such an original idea as well. I've loved every moment of it.
Is that the end? I was hoping for a reprieve for Goku. Surely there must be a way out for him.
xxx
Is that the end? I was hoping for a reprieve for Goku. Surely there must be a way out for him.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is very twisted. I love it. please write more.